Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi số nhiều (books thay vì book). Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I often go to the library because it has many books that I can borrow. It is more convenient and cheaper than buying new books.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ như 'reading books' thay vì 'reading book', và 'quiet environment' thay vì 'so quiet environment'. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ đúng nghĩa như 'resources' thay vì 'resorts'. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I usually read books in the library because it has a quiet environment. Moreover, it offers a variety of resources that help me learn new things.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, dùng 'I often went' thay vì 'I just often go'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp.

Example: I often went to the library when I was a kid because it had many books I needed. I preferred borrowing books instead of buying them.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa như 'ticked' và 'resorts'. Hãy dùng từ đúng như 'motivated' và 'resources'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

Example: In my opinion, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are motivated to find many resources that help improve their school skills.

× I usually go to the library because there are a lot of book in there and I can borrow it.

✓ I usually go to the library because there are a lot of books in there and I can borrow them.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'books'.

× It will more conveniently for me and low cost because if I want to buy a new book it's more expensive.

✓ It is more convenient for me and low cost because if I want to buy a new book it's more expensive.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used here. The sentence is describing a general fact, so the simple present tense 'is' should be used. Also, 'conveniently' (an adverb) should be 'convenient' (an adjective) to describe 'it'.

× I usually go to the library for reading book and they are so quiet environment so I can't forget to researching the new thing.

✓ I usually go to the library to read books and it is such a quiet environment that I can focus on researching new things.

The preposition 'for' should be 'to' before the verb 'read'. 'Book' should be plural 'books'. 'They are so quiet environment' is incorrect; 'it is such a quiet environment' is correct. 'Can't forget to researching' is incorrect; it should be 'can focus on researching'.

× It is also have a variety of resorts which were more useful for me.

✓ It also has a variety of resources which are more useful for me.

The pronoun 'It' should be followed by 'has' (third person singular verb). 'Resorts' is incorrect; the correct word is 'resources'. 'Were' should be 'are' to match present tense and plural subject 'resources'.

× I just often go to the library when we were a kid because only in the library had many a lot of books that I need.

✓ I often went to the library when I was a kid because only the library had many books that I needed.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'We' should be 'I' to match the subject. 'Had many a lot of books' is redundant; 'had many books' is correct. 'Need' should be past tense 'needed'.

× So I go to the library to borrow it instead of buying buying them.

✓ So I went to the library to borrow them instead of buying them.

The verb 'go' should be past tense 'went' to match previous sentence. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'books'. The word 'buying' is repeated unnecessarily; only one 'buying' is needed.

× In my opinion, the Chinese kids often go to the library because they are ticked to go to the library to find the a lot of resorts for them to improve the ability in school.

✓ In my opinion, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are eager to find a lot of resources to improve their abilities in school.

The phrase 'are ticked' is incorrect; 'are eager' or 'like' is appropriate. 'The a lot of resorts' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of resources'. 'The ability' should be plural 'their abilities'. The preposition 'for them to improve' is better expressed as 'to improve their abilities'.