Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, instead of repeating 'complete my assignments,' you can say 'I go to the library every week because it is a quiet place where I can focus on my assignments, and I also borrow books to help with my studies.'

Example: Yes, I go to the library every week because it is a quiet place where I can focus on my assignments. Additionally, I often borrow books there to support my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and a bit unclear. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Usually, I visit the library to borrow books. Then, I set a timer on my phone to complete my assignments within a fixed time because the quiet environment helps me concentrate.

Suggestion: Your answer is detailed but a bit long and could be more concise. Use past tense consistently and link your ideas smoothly. Avoid unnecessary details that do not add value to your answer.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library every week as a child because we had library classes. Our librarian would lead us there, and we would quietly browse through the books.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Avoid filler phrases like 'I think' and be more confident. Provide a clear opinion with reasons or examples. Also, improve sentence structure and vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I believe many Chinese children often go to the library because education is highly valued in China, and libraries provide important resources for learning.

× Yes, as I am a student and I go to library like every week just to complete my assignments as it is a quiet place to complete all your work and sometimes I do borrow books from there just to complete my assignments.

✓ Yes, as I am a student and I go to the library like every week just to complete my assignments as it is a quiet place to complete all your work and sometimes I do borrow books from there just to complete my assignments.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both the speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' in this context is incorrect.

× Most of the times I visit library just to borrow books and then I sit there and put a timer on my phone and complete my assignment in a fixed time and as it is a quiet place I finish completing my.

✓ Most of the time I visit the library just to borrow books and then I sit there and put a timer on my phone and complete my assignment in a fixed time and as it is a quiet place I finish completing my work.

The phrase 'most of the times' should be 'most of the time' for correct usage. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the particular place. The sentence was incomplete at the end; 'my' should be followed by 'work' to complete the thought.

× As I remember, I went to the library when I was a kid as we had library classes every week and our librarian came to our class to make up the line, and then we went quietly from the courtyard to the library class and we sit there and quietly look through the books.

✓ As I remember, I went to the library when I was a kid as we had library classes every week and our librarian came to our class to make up the line, and then we went quietly from the courtyard to the library class and we sat there and quietly looked through the books.

The verbs 'sit' and 'look' should be in the past tense 'sat' and 'looked' to maintain consistency with the past tense narration.

× As I think of course they do as China is one of the country which has like more developed and and techniques of technology.

✓ As I think, of course they do as China is one of the countries which has more developed techniques and technology.

The word 'country' should be plural 'countries' because 'one of the' refers to a member of a group. Also, the phrase 'more developed and and techniques of technology' is awkward; it should be 'more developed techniques and technology' for clarity.

× As a child, every kid go to the library.

✓ As a child, every kid goes to the library.

The subject 'every kid' is singular, so the verb should be 'goes' to agree in number (subject-verb agreement).