Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'well'. Also, structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: I don't often go to the library because nowadays, most information is easily accessible on the Internet. Therefore, I usually search online instead of visiting the library.

Suggestion: Avoid starting with conjunctions like 'But' and reduce vague phrases such as 'some sort of nice stuff'. Use clear linking words and provide specific details to make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: If I go to the library, I usually print materials from my laptop and do web research. Since I am a teacher, I also prepare lesson plans and look for interesting activities and strategies to use in class.

Suggestion: Try to avoid unnecessary fillers and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be more specific about your experience to enrich your answer.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid, especially during elementary and high school. However, I mostly read popular books rather than a wide variety of genres.

Suggestion: Avoid starting with uncertain phrases and filler words. Try to answer directly and provide your opinion clearly with supporting reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I am not sure about Chinese kids since I live in the Philippines and mostly teach Filipino students. However, I believe that going to the library is beneficial for all children to improve their knowledge and reading habits.

× I will probably going to make some lesson plans and search for something interesting activities and strategies that we could employ.

✓ I will probably make some lesson plans and search for some interesting activities and strategies that we could employ.

The phrase 'will probably going to' is incorrect because 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'going to' is a separate future tense construction and should not be combined with 'will'. The correct form is 'will probably make'. Additionally, 'something interesting activities' is incorrect; it should be 'some interesting activities' to match plural noun with appropriate quantifier.

× something interesting activities and strategies that we could employ.

✓ some interesting activities and strategies that we could employ.

The quantifier 'something' is used with singular nouns, but 'activities' is plural. Therefore, 'some' is the correct quantifier to use with plural countable nouns like 'activities'.