Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to avoid repeating words like "it's" and keep your sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place ideal for studying, and I can borrow books, which is more affordable than buying them.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but the sentence structure is confusing and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and use linking words like "because" or "therefore" to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I usually read books in the library because being surrounded by others studying motivates me. Also, the library has a wide variety of books, so I can easily find what I need.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some redundancy. Try to be more direct and concise, and avoid repeating phrases like "to the to the library." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: When I was a kid, I wasn't very aware of libraries. However, my school had library periods where we read magazines and encyclopedias, which was more for fun than serious reading.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and lacks confidence. Try to give a more direct response and avoid unnecessary repetition. If you are unsure, you can say so clearly and briefly.

Example: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my experience in India, children don't often visit libraries. Perhaps China has library periods for children, but I don't know much about that.

× Yes, I often go to the library because it's a very quiet place where we can study and also we can borrow books from there as it's it's cheaper than buying it from outside.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it's a very quiet place where we can study and also we can borrow books from there as it's cheaper than buying them from outside.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'books', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'them' to match the plural noun 'books'. This is an issue of incorrect pronoun use (ID 12).

× We usually read books as it's as your surrounding as all the people in your surrounding are reading books.

✓ We usually read books because all the people around you are reading books.

The phrase 'as your surrounding as all the people in your surrounding' is awkward and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'around' to indicate the people nearby. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× So it keeps you motivated that you have to study.

✓ So it keeps you motivated to study.

The phrase 'motivated that you have to study' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'motivated to study'. This is an incorrect use of conjunction or sentence structure (ID 16).

× Also, so many books are available in the library so we don't have to struggle a lot to find such books.

✓ Also, many books are available in the library, so we don't have to struggle much to find such books.

The phrase 'struggle a lot' is less natural than 'struggle much' in this context. Also, 'so many' is acceptable but 'many' is more appropriate here. This is an issue of incorrect use of quantifiers and prepositions (ID 14 and 11).

× No, when I was a kid I was not aware about the libraries.

✓ No, when I was a kid I was not aware of the libraries.

The correct preposition after 'aware' is 'of', not 'about'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× But yeah, sometimes our school has a period of library where we go to the library and read some magazines or the encyclopedias and everything.

✓ But yeah, sometimes our school has a library period where we go to the library and read some magazines or encyclopedias and everything.

The phrase 'period of library' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'library period'. Also, 'the encyclopedias' should be 'encyclopedias' without 'the' because it refers to them in general. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and articles (ID 11 and 22).

× So yeah, we went to the to the library, but not at the context of reading books and everything.

✓ So yeah, we went to the library, but not in the context of reading books and everything.

The phrase 'at the context' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the context'. Also, the repeated 'to the' is a redundancy error. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure (ID 11 and 26).

× It was just a fun.

✓ It was just fun.

The word 'fun' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the article 'a'. Using 'a fun' is incorrect. This is an incorrect use of articles and adjectives (ID 22 and 13).

× I don't know, maybe because as I am from India, so as kids we don't know really much.

✓ I don't know, maybe because I am from India, so as kids we don't really know much.

The phrase 'don't know really much' is awkward; the adverb 'really' should come before 'know'. Also, 'because as I am' is redundant; 'because I am' is sufficient. This is an incorrect adverb placement and sentence structure (ID 20 and 26).

× We don't know so much things about library.

✓ We don't know many things about the library.

The phrase 'so much things' is incorrect because 'things' is countable and requires 'many' instead of 'much'. Also, 'about library' needs the definite article 'the'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and articles (ID 14 and 22).

× But yeah, maybe China has a library period for the children's or I don't know about that.

✓ But yeah, maybe China has a library period for children or I don't know about that.

The phrase 'for the children's' is incorrect; 'children' is plural and does not need the possessive form here. This is an incorrect use of articles and pronouns (ID 22 and 12).