Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually find the information I need on the Internet. Therefore, I rely more on online resources than physical books.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use connectors like 'also' or 'in addition' to link your points. Avoid filler words like 'like'.

Example: People usually go to the library to find books that are not available online. In addition, it is a quiet place where they can study and read without distractions, which helps them stay motivated.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details with linking words.

Example: When I was a child, there was no Internet, so I often went to the library to read books and magazines. It was an important place for me to learn and find information.

Suggestion: Your answer is honest but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unnecessary details. Also, try to use more formal expressions.

Example: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I live in Tbilisi, Georgia. However, in my country, the younger generation rarely visits libraries since they prefer using the Internet for information.

× I don't really using a library.

✓ I don't really use a library.

The verb 'use' should be in its base form after 'don't'. Using 'using' here is incorrect because 'don't' requires the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form.

× people go to the library to find some books which is not available on the Internet.

✓ people go to the library to find some books which are not available on the Internet.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'books', which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× it's a quiet place where you can like learn, read quietly and you have some environment which gives you motivation.

✓ it's a quiet place where you can learn, read quietly and you have some environment which gives you motivation.

The word 'like' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'learn' in this context. 'Can' should be directly followed by the base verb 'learn' without 'like'.

× In my childhood, there was no Internet. That's why I often go to the library to research some books, to read or read books or read magazines.

✓ In my childhood, there was no Internet. That's why I often went to the library to research some books, to read books or magazines.

The action happened in the past, so the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went'. Also, 'to read or read books or read magazines' is repetitive; simplifying to 'to read books or magazines' is clearer.

× I don't think nowadays new generation go to the library.

✓ I don't think nowadays the new generation goes to the library.

'New generation' is singular, so the verb should be 'goes' to agree with the singular subject. Also, adding 'the' before 'new generation' is appropriate here.