Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I often go to the library' twice. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'this is very quiet and comfortable place, so you can focus on the subject and do it right,' you could say 'because it is a quiet and comfortable place where I can focus well on my studies.'

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place where I can focus well on my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid unclear phrases like 'Most of the BBC magazine artists.' Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you could say, 'I usually study or read books in the library because it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate.'

Example: I usually study or read books in the library because it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate.

Suggestion: Your answer is direct but could be improved by using more natural expressions and adding a reason. Avoid calling yourself 'stupid'; instead, explain why you didn't like the library. For example, you could say, 'No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I found it boring, but now I realize its importance.'

Example: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I found it boring, but now I realize its importance.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect grammar and awkward phrasing. Try to give a general opinion with correct grammar and avoid unnecessary numbers unless you are sure. For example, you could say, 'I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese children enjoy going to the library to read and study.'

Example: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese children enjoy going to the library to read and study.

× I really like this place because this is very quiet and comfortable place, so you can focus on the subject and do it right.

✓ I really like this place because it is a very quiet and comfortable place, so you can focus on the subject and do it right.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very quiet and comfortable place'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Also, 'this is' is better replaced with 'it is' to avoid repetition and improve flow.

× In the library I usually study or read books. This is very good place for it all.

✓ In the library I usually study or read books. It is a very good place for all of that.

The phrase 'This is very good place' lacks the article 'a' before 'very good place'. Also, 'for it all' is awkward; 'for all of that' is clearer and more natural.

× I think the library is not how can I say? Most of the BBC magazine artists.

✓ I think the library is not, how can I say, mostly for BBC magazine artists.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding commas and rephrasing improves clarity. The phrase 'Most of the BBC magazine artists' is incomplete and needs to be connected properly to the sentence.

× No, I didn't. I didn't like library when I was a kid and now I think that I was stupid.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't like the library when I was a kid, and now I think that I was stupid.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence flow.

× Now I don't know, I'm not Chinese, but in my opinion there is 55 kids who like library and enjoy it.

✓ Now I don't know, I'm not Chinese, but in my opinion there are 55 kids who like the library and enjoy it.

The phrase 'there is 55 kids' is incorrect because 'kids' is plural and requires 'there are'. Also, 'like library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'.