Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with concise reasons. For example, avoid repeating 'No, actually' and 'prefer' twice in a short answer.

Example: No, I don't go to the library often. Instead, I prefer reading ebooks and articles online because, as an academic writer and research instructor, I find digital resources more convenient for my work.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons.

Example: Although I rarely visit the library, I enjoy reading hard copies of books and papers during exam time because physically handling the materials helps me focus better on the content.

Suggestion: Improve sentence clarity and avoid contradictory statements. Use past tense consistently and provide clear reasons. Avoid vague phrases like 'something like that in present'.

Example: When I was a child, I loved going to the library with my parents because there were many interesting children's books. However, now I don't visit libraries often.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by simplifying and clarifying your opinion. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing like 'have the rules of that'.

Example: Although I am not Chinese, I believe that Chinese children are encouraged to visit libraries regularly and read physical books to learn new things every day.

× Actually I don't go to the library much, but I prefer to to read ebooks or articles.

✓ Actually I don't go to the library much, but I prefer to read ebooks or articles.

The phrase 'prefer to to read' contains a repeated 'to'. The correct form is 'prefer to read' because 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive form without repetition of 'to'.

× So hard copies makes it in touch, makes you in touch physically with the words and sometimes numbers.

✓ So hard copies make it in touch, make you in touch physically with the words and sometimes numbers.

The subject 'hard copies' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.

× So it makes me, it's made me the happiest person on the earth as there are many kids books and something like that in present.

✓ So it made me the happiest person on the earth as there were many kids' books and something like that then.

The sentence refers to a past period ('childhood period'), so past tense 'made' and 'were' should be used. Also, 'kids books' should be 'kids' books' to show possession.

× I loved to go to the library with my parents firstly.

✓ I loved to go to the library with my parents at first.

The adverb 'firstly' is not appropriate here; 'at first' is the correct phrase to indicate the initial time.

× I am not a Chinese person, but I think Chinese kids have the rules of that makes them go to the library and read from physical papers and books so that they could learn something new every single day.

✓ I am not a Chinese person, but I think Chinese kids have rules that make them go to the library and read physical papers and books so that they can learn something new every single day.

The phrase 'have the rules of that makes' is incorrect. It should be 'have rules that make' to correctly connect the subject and verb. Also, 'could' is changed to 'can' to express general ability or habit.