Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some errors. 「rivalry」 is not appropriate here; you might have meant "library". Also, try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, say "I often go to the library to study for my final exams. Last month, I went to the library in my city and studied English and science with my friends."

Example: Yes, I often go to the library to study for my final exams. For example, last month I went to the city library and studied English and science with my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making the sentences more natural. Instead of "as I say in the library," you can omit it. Also, "anime animals" is unclear; you might mean "animals in anime" or "anime about animals." Try to use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I usually study English or science in the library. Also, sometimes I search for information about my favorite animals featured in anime.

Suggestion: There are grammar mistakes and some repetition. Use past tense consistently, and avoid repeating words like "and." Also, say "a memorable experience" instead of "memorable experience." For example, "Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child because my mother took me there. We studied and read books together. It was a memorable experience for me."

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child because my mother took me there. We studied and read books together. It was a memorable experience for me.

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitations and grammar errors. Avoid filler words like "umm." Also, "eat books" is incorrect; you probably meant "read books." Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words. For example, "To be honest, I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library nowadays because there are more e-books available, so people prefer reading online rather than visiting the library."

Example: To be honest, I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library nowadays because there are more e-books available, so people prefer reading online rather than visiting the library.

× Yes, I often go to the library to study the final exam at my school.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to study for the final exam at my school.

The phrase 'study the final exam' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'study for the final exam' because 'study for' indicates preparation for something. This is a preposition usage issue, but since it relates to verb usage in past tense context, it is categorized here.

× For example, I went to a rivalry in my city last month and I studied English and science with my friends.

✓ For example, I went to a library in my city last month and studied English and science with my friends.

The word 'rivalry' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'library'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× I usually study English or science as I say in the library.

✓ I usually study English or science, as I said, in the library.

The phrase 'as I say' should be 'as I said' to match the past tense context. Also, a comma is needed before 'as I said' to separate the clauses properly.

× Also, sometimes I search for the information about my favorite anime animals.

✓ Also, sometimes I search for information about my favorite anime animals.

The article 'the' before 'information' is unnecessary because 'information' is an uncountable noun used in a general sense here.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child because my mother take me.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child because my mother took me.

The verb 'take' should be in the past tense 'took' to agree with the past context 'used to' and 'was a child'.

× My mother took me out to the library to study and and and read a book.

✓ My mother took me out to the library to study and read a book.

The repeated 'and' is a typographical error and should be removed for clarity.

× It was memorable experience for me.

✓ It was a memorable experience for me.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'memorable experience'.

× Umm, to be honest, I don't think umm Chinese people often go to the library because nowadays there are a more ebooks in the world, so people can read, eat books more and more rather than going to the library.

✓ Umm, to be honest, I don't think umm Chinese people often go to the library because nowadays there are more ebooks in the world, so people can read ebooks more and more rather than going to the library.

The phrase 'a more ebooks' is incorrect; 'more ebooks' is correct because 'ebooks' is plural and does not need 'a'. Also, 'eat books' is incorrect and should be 'read ebooks'.