Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'keen on go' thay vì 'keen on going'. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và dùng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy borrowing books there. I usually spend three to four hours studying and doing my homework in a quiet environment.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'books that interested me' nên là 'books that interest me'. Tránh lặp từ như 'Additionally' hai lần liên tiếp. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, có liên kết giữa các ý và sử dụng từ nối hợp lý.

Example: I usually borrow books that interest me and spend three to four hours reading them. Additionally, when I go with my friends, we enjoy studying and doing homework together.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'I'm not keen' nên là 'I wasn't keen', 'never go to eat' không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ đúng và diễn đạt rõ ràng, tự nhiên hơn.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in it. I thought the library was boring, so I rarely visited it.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'I think' nhiều lần và dùng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Ví dụ 'love go to library' nên là 'love going to the library'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ nối hợp lý.

Example: Yes, I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because they need to study hard to achieve good marks in their tests.

× I really keen on go to the library because up there I can borrow books that I like and I can sit there for three to four hours to study and do my homework.

✓ I am really keen on going to the library because up there I can borrow books that I like and I can sit there for three to four hours to study and do my homework.

The phrase 'keen on' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, not the base form. Therefore, 'go' should be corrected to 'going'. This is a common structure in English where certain expressions require the gerund form after them.

× In the library, I often borrow books that interested me and I usually spend 3 to 4 hours to read it.

✓ In the library, I often borrow books that interest me and I usually spend 3 to 4 hours reading them.

The verb 'interested' is incorrectly used in the past tense; it should be the present tense 'interest' to match the habitual action. Also, 'spend' is followed by a gerund ('reading'), not an infinitive ('to read'). Additionally, 'books' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× Additionally, if I go there with my friends, I I enjoy to study and do my homework with my friends.

✓ Additionally, if I go there with my friends, I enjoy studying and doing my homework with them.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('studying'), not an infinitive ('to study'). Also, to avoid repetition, 'my friends' is replaced with 'them' in the second instance.

× No, I didn't because when when I was a kid I'm not keen on the library and I think library is very boring and I never go to eat.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a kid I wasn't keen on the library and I thought the library was very boring and I never went there.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'I'm not keen' should be 'I wasn't keen' to match the past context. 'I think' should be 'I thought' and 'library is' should be 'the library was'. Also, 'never go to eat' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'never went there' to indicate not visiting the library.

× I think yes they do because I have been to China and I think Chinese kids they love go to library because they have to study hard to get a best mark in the test.

✓ I think yes, they do because I have been to China and I think Chinese kids love going to the library because they have to study hard to get the best marks in tests.

The phrase 'love go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'love going to the library' with the gerund form and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'a best mark' is incorrect; 'the best marks' is appropriate. 'In the test' is better as 'in tests' for generalization.