Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy by saying 'I don't often go to the library' instead of 'I never often go'. Keep your answer clear and concise with proper grammar.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because I was working while I was a student. At that time, I visited the library occasionally.

Suggestion: Use clearer sentence structure and linking words to connect ideas. Be specific and avoid awkward phrasing. For example, say 'I usually go to the library to borrow specific books, including interesting storybooks and science books for my projects.'

Example: I usually go to the library to borrow specific books. For example, I like reading interesting storybooks apart from my studies, and I also take science books to help me complete my projects.

Suggestion: Use past tense correctly and organize your answer with linking words. Make your sentences clear and avoid repetition. For example, 'Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I was curious. I liked the quiet environment and the variety of books available.'

Example: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I was curious. I enjoyed the quiet atmosphere and the fact that I could choose from many books to study.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your opinion clear. For example, 'I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they prefer quiet places to study and are very focused.'

Example: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they like quiet places for studying, and they are usually very focused on their work.

× No, I never often go to library because I'm doing job when I was student.

✓ No, I do not often go to the library because I was working when I was a student.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'never often' which is contradictory; 'do not often' is correct. Also, 'I'm doing job when I was student' mixes present continuous with past tense; it should be past tense 'I was working'. Additionally, 'go to library' lacks the definite article 'the'. The modal verb 'do' is used for negation in present simple tense here.

× No, I never often go to library because I'm doing job when I was student.

✓ No, I do not often go to the library because I was working when I was a student.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, 'library' as a specific place requires 'the'. Also, 'was student' needs the article 'a' before 'student'.

× No, I never often go to library because I'm doing job when I was student.

✓ No, I do not often go to the library because I was working when I was a student.

The phrase 'I'm doing job when I was student' incorrectly mixes present continuous tense with past tense. It should be in past tense 'I was working' to match the time frame 'when I was a student'.

× That time I go to library, but not often.

✓ At that time, I went to the library, but not often.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time reference 'that time'. Also, 'to library' needs the article 'the'.

× That time I go to library, but not often.

✓ At that time, I went to the library, but not often.

The phrase 'to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× Usually I go to like library to take some specific book and some interesting story books apart from my study because I like to read that type of book and some books are which is related to science to complete my project.

✓ Usually I go to the library to take some specific books and some interesting story books apart from my studies because I like to read that type of book and some books which are related to science to complete my project.

The phrase 'go to like library' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary. 'Some specific book' should be plural 'books' to match 'some'. 'Apart from my study' should be 'apart from my studies'. 'Some books are which is related' is incorrect; it should be 'some books which are related'.

× Usually I go to like library to take some specific book and some interesting story books apart from my study because I like to read that type of book and some books are which is related to science to complete my project.

✓ Usually I go to the library to take some specific books and some interesting story books apart from my studies because I like to read that type of book and some books which are related to science to complete my project.

The phrase 'some specific book' should be plural 'books' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'my study' should be plural 'my studies' to refer to academic work in general.

× Usually I go to like library to take some specific book and some interesting story books apart from my study because I like to read that type of book and some books are which is related to science to complete my project.

✓ Usually I go to the library to take some specific books and some interesting story books apart from my studies because I like to read that type of book and some books which are related to science to complete my project.

The phrase 'go to like library' is incorrect; 'like' should be removed. Also, 'some books are which is related' is incorrect; it should be 'some books which are related'.

× Yes I go to library when I was kid but first time I was curious I went to library but after that when I saw the environment in the library that is like too much towards to the study and that you are surrounded with the lots of book you can choose what you want to study.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. The first time I was curious, I went to the library, but after that, when I saw the environment in the library, it was too focused on study and you are surrounded by lots of books you can choose to study.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Was kid' needs the article 'a'. 'Too much towards to the study' is incorrect; it should be 'too focused on study'. 'Surrounded with the lots of book' should be 'surrounded by lots of books'.

× Yes I go to library when I was kid but first time I was curious I went to library but after that when I saw the environment in the library that is like too much towards to the study and that you are surrounded with the lots of book you can choose what you want to study.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. The first time I was curious, I went to the library, but after that, when I saw the environment in the library, it was too focused on study and you are surrounded by lots of books you can choose to study.

The phrase 'go to library' and 'went to library' are missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'was kid' needs the article 'a'.

× Yes I go to library when I was kid but first time I was curious I went to library but after that when I saw the environment in the library that is like too much towards to the study and that you are surrounded with the lots of book you can choose what you want to study.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. The first time I was curious, I went to the library, but after that, when I saw the environment in the library, it was too focused on study and you are surrounded by lots of books you can choose to study.

The phrase 'too much towards to the study' is incorrect; it should be 'too focused on study'. Also, 'surrounded with the lots of book' should be 'surrounded by lots of books'.

× I thought yes because Chinese people are like to choose quiet places for studies and they are very focused to do something and as per my point of view they like to go library.

✓ I think yes because Chinese people like to choose quiet places for studying and they are very focused on doing something and, in my point of view, they like to go to the library.

The phrase 'I thought yes' is incorrect in present context; 'I think yes' is appropriate. 'Are like to choose' should be 'like to choose'. 'For studies' should be 'for studying'. 'Focused to do' should be 'focused on doing'. 'Like to go library' needs 'to the library'.

× I thought yes because Chinese people are like to choose quiet places for studies and they are very focused to do something and as per my point of view they like to go library.

✓ I think yes because Chinese people like to choose quiet places for studying and they are very focused on doing something and, in my point of view, they like to go to the library.

The phrase 'for studies' should be 'for studying'. 'Focused to do' should be 'focused on doing'. 'Like to go library' should be 'like to go to the library'.