Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use past and present tenses correctly and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas and using linking words.

Example: I don't go to the library often now, but I used to visit it frequently in high school because I found it hard to study at home. Therefore, I went there to prepare for exams.

Suggestion: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and clarify your ideas with linking words for coherence.

Example: Usually, I study and do my homework in the library. Sometimes, I also chat with my classmates because studying alone can be difficult.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use past tense consistently and provide specific details to make your answer more engaging.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library with my parents when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading different books there, especially storybooks, and my mom usually accompanied me.

Suggestion: Work on sentence structure and grammar to express your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points logically and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: I'm not sure if going to libraries is common in our culture. However, when I was a child, there were fewer distractions like computers and smartphones, so children often went to the library to read books.

× I think I visit a lot when I was in high school 'cause I need to prepare the exam.

✓ I think I visited a lot when I was in high school because I needed to prepare for the exam.

The sentence mixes present tense 'visit' and 'need' with past time reference 'when I was in high school'. The verbs should be in past tense to match the time frame. Also, 'prepare the exam' should be 'prepare for the exam' to use the correct preposition.

× So I went there a lot because I find it hard to study properly at home, so I will go to library.

✓ So I went there a lot because I found it hard to study properly at home, so I would go to the library.

The sentence refers to past events, so 'find' should be 'found' and 'will go' should be 'would go' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× As I said, I would study there to preparing my exam and do my homework there, but I sometime I was just enjoy to like have a check with my classmate because it's hard to study.

✓ As I said, I would study there to prepare for my exam and do my homework there, but sometimes I would just enjoy having a chat with my classmates because it's hard to study.

'to preparing' is incorrect; after 'to' the base verb 'prepare' should be used. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'was just enjoy to like have a check' is ungrammatical; 'would just enjoy having a chat' is correct. 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to match the context.

× I find it umm really interesting to read the comments book there and my mom usually would go to.

✓ I found it really interesting to read the comics book there and my mom usually would go too.

The sentence refers to past experiences, so 'find' should be 'found'. 'comments book' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'comics book'. 'would go to' is incomplete; 'would go too' is correct to indicate 'also'.

× So go to library to read some books would be.

✓ So going to the library to read some books would be common.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'common' completes the thought. 'Going' is the correct gerund form here to function as the subject.