Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and correct prepositions, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I rarely go to the library because it is far from my home and I have a hectic schedule. Therefore, I prefer reading ebooks at home since they are more convenient and easily accessible online these days.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details using proper linking words.

Example: I don't visit the library often, but when I was in middle school, we had a class in the library where we read general knowledge and story books. It was a good opportunity to enjoy reading in a quiet environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, when I was in middle school, we regularly had classes in the library. We would read various books, such as storybooks and informative general knowledge books. I found it interesting to spend time in a quiet and comfortable place while reading.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and contains incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons and avoid grammatical errors.

Example: Although I am not from China, I believe that students there, like in other countries, often go to the library. This helps them improve their reading skills and expand their knowledge.

× The library is not so close to my home so don't get much time to go to library.

✓ The library is not so close to my home so I don't get much time to go to the library.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'don't get', and the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. Including 'I' clarifies who doesn't get time, and 'the library' is the correct form when referring to a specific library.

× I'll prefer to read ebooks at convenient of my home and you can find all the books online these days.

✓ I prefer to read ebooks at the convenience of my home and you can find all the books online these days.

The phrase 'at convenient of my home' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'at the convenience of my home' to indicate comfort or ease. Also, 'I'll prefer' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is the correct present tense form to express a habitual action.

× As told, I don't go to the library frequently, but when I was in my in school, middle school, we used to have one class in the library where we read the books like general knowledge books or story books.

✓ As I said, I don't go to the library frequently, but when I was in middle school, we used to have one class in the library where we read books like general knowledge books or story books.

The phrase 'As told' is incorrect; 'As I said' is the proper expression. Also, 'my in school, middle school' is redundant and awkward; 'in middle school' suffices. 'The books' is better as 'books' here because it refers to types of books in general.

× Yes, In middle school we used to have class in library regularly, so we used to.

✓ Yes, in middle school we used to have class in the library regularly, so we used to.

The phrase 'in library' is missing the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'In' should be lowercase unless at the beginning of a sentence.

× So we would go there and read various books like story books or informative books like general knowledge.

✓ So we would go there and read various books, such as story books or informative books like general knowledge books.

The sentence is missing a comma before 'such as' to introduce examples properly. Also, 'like' is better replaced with 'such as' when giving examples. Adding 'books' after 'general knowledge' clarifies the meaning.

× It was really interesting to be in quiet and comfortable place and read the books.

✓ It was really interesting to be in a quiet and comfortable place and read books.

The phrase 'in quiet and comfortable place' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'quiet'. Also, 'the books' should be 'books' because it refers to books in general, not specific ones.

× Well, I am not from China, but I think in every country, even in China, students must go to library and read the books.

✓ Well, I am not from China, but I think in every country, even in China, students must go to the library and read books.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'the books' should be 'books' when speaking generally.

× It will develop their reading skills and. Was their knowledge.

✓ It will develop their reading skills and increase their knowledge.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Was their knowledge' is incorrect and should be replaced with a complete phrase like 'increase their knowledge' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.