Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'I stay focused more more than other places', say 'I can focus better there compared to other places.'

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a very quiet place. I can focus better there compared to other places. Moreover, I enjoy borrowing books from the library as it is cheaper than buying them. Additionally, I like to use the various resources available there.

Suggestion: Your answer covers the main points but lacks coherence and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words like 'also' and 'in addition' properly to connect ideas. Try to be more specific about the 'social services' and avoid vague phrases like 'regular daily purpose'.

Example: When I need a quiet place, I go to the library for reading and research. In addition, I use the social services they provide, such as community programs. The library also offers free Wi-Fi, which I often use. Furthermore, there are several magazines available that I read regularly.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Avoid repeating phrases and be more specific. For example, explain what kind of 'social work' the library provided. Also, use proper tenses and sentence structures.

Example: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my cousins and sometimes with my father. My father used to read newspapers and magazines there. The library also offered community activities, which I enjoyed participating in as a child.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and run-on sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence and be more precise. For example, say 'libraries provide a quiet environment and offer many computer technologies that children can use for research.'

Example: Yes, many Chinese children frequently go to the library, especially in urban areas where such facilities are easily available. Libraries provide a quiet environment and offer many computer technologies that children can use for their research purposes.

× I love to borrowing book from library because it's cheaper than buying them

✓ I love to borrow books from the library because it's cheaper than buying them

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the context of borrowing multiple items. Also, 'borrowing' is incorrectly used after 'love to'; the correct form is the base verb 'borrow'.

× I love to borrowing book from library because it's cheaper than buying them

✓ I love to borrow books from the library because it's cheaper than buying them

After 'love to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Hence, 'borrowing' should be 'borrow'.

× I love to use resources and.

✓ I love to use resources.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incorrect. Also, 'use resources' does not require a preposition here. The sentence should be complete and clear.

× I love to go library for the reading and research purpose.

✓ I love to go to the library for reading and research purposes.

The preposition 'to' is missing after 'go'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'. 'Purpose' should be plural 'purposes' to match 'reading and research'.

× Also I love to use resources there like social services they have provided

✓ Also, I love to use resources there like the social services they have provided.

A comma is needed after 'Also'. 'The' is required before 'social services' to specify them. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× and of course there are free Wi-Fi connection so I love to use that and several magazines available there which I used often in my regular daily purpose.

✓ Of course, there is a free Wi-Fi connection, so I love to use it. Several magazines are available there which I often use for my regular daily purposes.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'Wi-Fi connection' is singular, so 'is' is used. 'Use that' changed to 'use it' for clarity. 'Magazines' is plural, so 'are' is used. 'Used often' changed to 'often use' for correct tense and word order. 'Purpose' should be plural 'purposes'.

× I loved to go library with my cousins and some time with my father.

✓ I loved to go to the library with my cousins and sometimes with my father.

The preposition 'to' is missing after 'go'. 'Some time' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× They go to the library for the newspapers and some social work they have provided.

✓ They go to the library for newspapers and some social work they have provided.

'Newspapers' should be plural without 'the' as it refers to newspapers in general. The sentence is clearer without 'the' before 'newspapers'.

× And there are several magazines which my father used to read about and I when I was a kid, I love to do some work.

✓ There are several magazines which my father used to read, and when I was a kid, I loved to do some work.

The phrase 'used to read about' is incorrect; 'used to read' is sufficient. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage ('love' changed to 'loved').

× many Chinese children frequently go to the library especially in the urban areas where these kind of facilities is easily available

✓ Many Chinese children frequently go to the library, especially in urban areas where these kinds of facilities are easily available.

'These kind' should be 'these kinds' to agree with plural 'facilities'. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject 'facilities'. Commas added for clarity.

× and library provide a quiet environment and so many social computer technologies available there so they can use for their research purpose.

✓ and libraries provide a quiet environment, and many social computer technologies are available there so they can use them for their research purposes.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to match 'many Chinese children' context. 'Provide' should be 'provide' to agree with plural subject. 'So many' changed to 'many' for naturalness. 'Technologies available' needs 'are' to be grammatically correct. 'Use' needs an object 'them'. 'Purpose' should be plural 'purposes'.