Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and slightly ungrammatical. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library, especially during finals, because many students study there. Therefore, I usually arrive early to secure a seat.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Example: I usually complete assignments with my coursemates in the library's discussion room, which is equipped with monitors, tables, and chairs. I enjoy this environment because it helps me concentrate better.

Suggestion: There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, try to separate ideas into sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Example: I never went to the library when I was a kid because I preferred to finish my homework quickly and then hang out with my friends. However, I started going regularly during my university years.

Suggestion: Avoid making generalisations or assumptions about groups of people. Also, correct grammatical errors and avoid repetition. Use more neutral and precise language with clear linking words.

Example: Yes, I believe many Chinese children often go to the library because they tend to be hardworking students. Whenever I visit, I notice that there are more Chinese students than others.

× I have to study for exams and preparing for the finals and during this period of time so many students will go to the library for self studying.

✓ I have to study for exams and prepare for the finals, and during this period of time so many students will go to the library for self-studying.

After 'have to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'preparing' should be corrected to 'prepare'. Also, 'self studying' should be hyphenated as 'self-studying' to form a compound noun.

× I've never went to the library when I was a kid because after the school I just complete my homework as soon as possible and hang out with my friends, but I go to the library regularly during the university life.

✓ I've never gone to the library when I was a kid because after school I just completed my homework as soon as possible and hung out with my friends, but I go to the library regularly during university life.

The present perfect tense requires the past participle form of the verb, so 'went' should be 'gone'. Also, 'complete' and 'hang out' should be in the past tense 'completed' and 'hung out' to match the past time frame. 'After the school' should be 'after school' and 'during the university life' should be 'during university life' for natural phrasing.

× Every time I went to the library, I can saw, I saw, I see there is a greater number of Chinese students than the other.

✓ Every time I went to the library, I could see there was a greater number of Chinese students than the others.

The modal verb 'can' should be in the past form 'could' to match 'went'. 'Saw' is past tense and should not be repeated; 'could see' is sufficient. 'There is' should be 'there was' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Than the other' should be 'than the others' to correctly compare groups.