Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va noaniq ifodalar mavjud. Masalan, 'I live a place' o'rniga 'I live in a place' deyish kerak. Shuningdek, gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, mantiqiy bog'lanish so'zlarini qo'shishingiz lozim. Masalan, 'because of the distance' so'zidan keyin sababni yanada tushuntiring.

Example: I rarely visit public libraries in my hometown because they are far from my house. Moreover, there is a lot of construction around, so it is difficult to go there. Therefore, I prefer to study at home using the AE version of books.

Suggestion: Javobingizda ba'zi so'zlar noto'g'ri ishlatilgan, masalan, 'to the list' o'rniga aniq nima qilishingizni ayting. Shuningdek, gaplaringizni yanada mantiqiy bog'lab, aniq va tabiiy qilib ifodalashga harakat qiling.

Example: When I go to the library, I focus on studying. For example, I learn new vocabulary and complete my assignments from Webster University. Also, I enjoy reading books there because the environment is quiet, but sometimes I prefer working on my computer.

Suggestion: Javobingizda gaplar bir-biriga to'g'ri bog'lanmagan va grammatik xatolar ko'p. Masalan, 'For sure. No because' o'rniga aniq javob bering. Gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniq qilib, mantiqiy bog'lanish so'zlarini ishlating.

Example: No, I did not go to the library as a child because I grew up in a village without many schools or libraries. However, my family was educated, and we had a small library at home that belonged to my grandparents.

Suggestion: Javobingiz juda qisqa va tushuntirishsiz. Savolga to'liq javob berish uchun fikringizni sabablar bilan kengaytiring va mantiqiy bog'lanish so'zlarini ishlating.

Example: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because many of them prefer studying at home or using digital resources. Also, some libraries may not be easily accessible for all children.

× Unfortunately I live a place where all constructions going on nowadays so it is easier for me to access any kind of books.

✓ Unfortunately, I live in a place where all constructions are going on nowadays, so it is not easier for me to access any kind of books.

The preposition 'in' is required after 'live' to indicate location. Also, the sentence logic suggests difficulty accessing books due to construction, so 'not easier' fits better. Additionally, the verb 'going' needs auxiliary 'are' to form present continuous tense.

× Unfortunately I live a place where all constructions going on nowadays so it is easier for me to access any kind of books.

✓ Unfortunately, I live in a place where all constructions are going on nowadays, so it is not easier for me to access any kind of books.

The verb 'going' is a present participle and requires the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense 'are going'. Without 'are', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× And nowadays we have AE version so I study at home as I'm going to library.

✓ And nowadays we have the AE version, so I study at home instead of going to the library.

The phrase 'going to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'as I'm going to library' is unclear; 'instead of going to the library' better expresses the intended meaning.

× When I go to the library, I try to focus on my studies and to the list.

✓ When I go to the library, I try to focus on my studies and the list.

The preposition 'to' before 'the list' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'focus on my studies and the list'.

× For instance, I try to learn new vocabulary or do my assignments from the Webster University.

✓ For instance, I try to learn new vocabulary or do my assignments at Webster University.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect when referring to the place where assignments are done. 'At' is the correct preposition to indicate location.

× Moreover, I really do read books because of the quite intensive environment, but I prefer to do something on my computer.

✓ Moreover, I really do read books because of the quite intensive environment, but I prefer to do something on my computer.

No correction needed here as the prepositions are used correctly.

× No because I grew up in a village where there wasn't even enough schools not talking about libraries and however my family were educated and we had a mini library at our home which was supposed to be my grandparents.

✓ No, because I grew up in a village where there weren't even enough schools, not to mention libraries. However, my family was educated, and we had a mini library at our home which belonged to my grandparents.

The phrase 'not talking about' is incorrect; 'not to mention' is the correct idiomatic expression. Also, 'there wasn't even enough schools' should be 'there weren't even enough schools' due to plural 'schools'. 'My family were' should be 'my family was' as 'family' is a collective noun treated as singular here. 'Supposed to be my grandparents' is unclear; 'belonged to my grandparents' is clearer.

× No because I grew up in a village where there wasn't even enough schools not talking about libraries and however my family were educated and we had a mini library at our home which was supposed to be my grandparents.

✓ No, because I grew up in a village where there weren't even enough schools, not to mention libraries. However, my family was educated, and we had a mini library at our home which belonged to my grandparents.

The verb 'wasn't' does not agree with the plural noun 'schools'; it should be 'weren't'. Also, 'my family were' should be 'my family was' because 'family' is a singular collective noun in this context.