Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer wa, motto shizen de, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I don't often go to the library, but I enjoy reading books at home to improve my English skills.' to iu fuu ni, jikan wo muda ni shinai you ni shite, setsumei mo shousai ni shite kudasai.

Example: I don't often go to the library, but I enjoy reading books at home to improve my English skills and expand my vocabulary.

Suggestion: Kotae wa motto rikai shi yasuku, shizen na eigo de setsumei shite kudasai. Fukanou na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na hyougen wa sakete, rikai shiyasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I usually read books in the library because I like the quiet atmosphere, which helps me relax.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

Example: I usually read books in the library because I like the quiet atmosphere, which helps me relax and concentrate better.

Suggestion: Kotae wa chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete, jikan wo muda ni shinai you ni shite kudasai. Mata, rikai shi yasui you ni, jisho teki na kotoba wa sakete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I didn't go to the library often as a child because I wasn't interested in reading, but now I understand its importance.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

Example: I didn't go to the library often as a child because I wasn't interested in reading, but now I understand its importance for improving my English skills.

Suggestion: Kotae wa motto shizen de, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Fuyou na kurikaeshi ya fukuzatsu na hyougen wa sakete, rikai shiyasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I am not sure, but I think children who like reading often visit the library.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

Example: I am not sure, but I think children who like reading often visit the library to find interesting books.

× To be honest, I don't usually go to the library 'cause when I was a kid I don't usually like reading books, but now that I am now an adult, I like reading books so I can enhance more of my reading skills as well as my English.

✓ To be honest, I don't usually go to the library because when I was a kid I didn't usually like reading books, but now that I am an adult, I like reading books so I can enhance my reading skills as well as my English.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'don't' (present tense) when referring to a past habit. The correct past tense form 'didn't' should be used to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate. 'Enhance more of my reading skills' is awkward; 'enhance my reading skills' is clearer.

× Whenever I go to the library, I usually read books. Enjoy the silence of being alone. Reading books makes me so calming for me stupid.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I usually read books and enjoy the silence of being alone. Reading books makes me feel calm and relaxed.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Enjoy the silence of being alone' lacks a subject and verb. 'Reading books makes me so calming for me stupid' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction combines ideas into a coherent sentence and uses correct expressions.

× When I was a kid, I didn't usually go to the library because I am not interested in reading books. But recently I realized that I need to read more to enhance my reading skills as well as my English and to discover more words.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't usually go to the library because I was not interested in reading books. But recently I realized that I need to read more to enhance my reading skills as well as my English and to discover more words.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I am not interested' should be 'I was not interested' to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'. The rest of the sentence correctly uses present tense for recent realizations.

× Actually I don't have any idea if Chinese kids often go to the library, but in my opinion maybe some kids, those kids that are those kids who loves reading, maybe goes to the library in my opinion.

✓ Actually, I don't have any idea if Chinese kids often go to the library, but in my opinion, maybe some kids, those kids who love reading, maybe go to the library.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors. 'Kids who loves' should be 'kids who love' because 'kids' is plural. 'Maybe goes' should be 'maybe go' to agree with the plural subject 'some kids'. Also, redundant phrases were removed for clarity.