Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question first, then add supporting details. Avoid repeating phrases and unclear statements. Use simple and natural English to express your opinion clearly.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer listening to audiobooks rather than reading. I find reading a bit boring, so I usually listen to books while doing other activities.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain your activities in the library with specific details and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: When I go to the library with my family, I usually take pictures of the beautiful book displays. However, I don't spend much time reading there because I prefer other activities.

Suggestion: Provide a clear and complete answer. Use correct sentence structures and avoid repetition. Add linking words to connect ideas and give specific examples.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child. Instead, my father often took us to toy shops where we bought kitchen toys and makeup sets that we enjoyed playing with.

Suggestion: Try to answer the question based on your knowledge or opinion. Use complete sentences and avoid hesitation. You can say you are not sure but still give a general idea with reasons.

Example: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many of them do go to the library because reading is important in their education. Libraries provide a good place for studying and learning.

× I don't really go off into the library because I'm not a real person.

✓ I don't really go to the library because I'm not a real person.

The preposition 'off into' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to indicate going to a place is 'to'. So, 'go to the library' is the proper phrase.

× I prefer listening than reading.

✓ I prefer listening to reading.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two activities, not 'than'. So, the correct phrase is 'prefer listening to reading'.

× And I always, I always believe that reading books and listening to books are boring excessively because I'm not a, I'm not a.

✓ I always believe that reading books and listening to books are excessively boring because I'm not a reader.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, the phrase 'boring excessively' is awkward; 'excessively boring' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'reader' clarifies the meaning.

× If I went to a lottery with my brother or my father, I will always take my phone and take some pictures.

✓ If I went to a library with my brother or my father, I would always take my phone and take some pictures.

'Lottery' is incorrect; the intended word is 'library'. Also, the conditional sentence mixes past tense 'went' with future 'will'; it should be 'would' for the second clause in the second conditional.

× Aesthetic, the books in the shop, the shop.

✓ I find the books in the shop aesthetically pleasing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Aesthetic' is an adjective; to express appreciation, use 'aesthetically pleasing'. Also, 'shop' is vague; contextually, 'library' or 'bookshop' might be better.

× No, in my childhood I didn't attend to go to any library.

✓ No, in my childhood I didn't go to any library.

The phrase 'attend to go' is incorrect. The verb 'attend' is not used with 'to go'. The correct expression is simply 'didn't go to any library'.

× My father would would go with us to the to the toy shop and also buy some toys that we engaged in like kitchen toys, make up sets, something that.

✓ My father would go with us to the toy shop and also buy some toys that we played with, like kitchen toys and makeup sets.

The phrase 'engaged in' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'played with' when referring to toys. Also, 'make up sets' should be 'makeup sets'. The sentence had repeated words and was incomplete; these were corrected for clarity.

× Actually, I don't have a huge information about what Chinese, Chinese kids do often when they were young or like, I don't really think that they would.

✓ Actually, I don't have much information about what Chinese kids often do when they were young, and I don't really think that they would.

'A huge information' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'much' instead of 'a huge'. Also, the sentence was repetitive and slightly fragmented; it was smoothed for clarity.