Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct tense and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Apart from this', you can say 'Moreover' or 'In addition'.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library whenever I have leisure time. Moreover, the quiet environment there helps me concentrate better on my work. I also use the library resources for my academic studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'Apart from this' multiple times. Use linking words like 'also' or 'furthermore' to connect ideas. Make your sentences concise and clear.

Example: In the library, I usually spend most of my time reading books. I also enjoy reading fictional books because the pin-drop silence helps me concentrate. Furthermore, I sometimes read books that help improve my vocabulary.

Suggestion: Your answer has tense errors and is a bit unclear. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear and complete response with linking words.

Example: Yes, when I was a child, I usually went to the library to read books during my school days. I often visited the library in my free time because it helped me with my studies. However, there were not many novels or fiction books available, which was a bit disappointing.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct sentence structures. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use linking words like 'besides' and 'also' properly.

Example: Yes, as far as I know, Chinese kids often go to the library because it supports their academic work. Besides, I have seen many Japanese and Chinese cartoons where children enjoy using library resources, which shows that visiting the library is a fun activity for them.

× Yes, many time whenever I got leisure time, I go to library to spend my time.

✓ Yes, many times whenever I get leisure time, I go to the library to spend my time.

The word 'time' should be plural 'times' to indicate frequency. Also, 'got' should be 'get' to match present tense. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× I go to library to spend my time.

✓ I go to the library to spend my time.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Apart from this, in libraries the environment is very silent so I can consider it easy easily on my work.

✓ Apart from this, in libraries the environment is very quiet so I can concentrate easily on my work.

The adjective 'silent' is incorrectly used; 'quiet' is more appropriate to describe the environment. 'Consider it easy easily' is incorrect; 'concentrate easily' fits the intended meaning.

× Moreover, I I take the library resources for my academic works also.

✓ Moreover, I use the library resources for my academic work also.

'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to academic activities in general. 'Take' is not the correct verb here; 'use' is appropriate.

× Well I usually spend my time most of the time in libraries by reading the books.

✓ Well, I usually spend most of my time in libraries by reading books.

'The books' is too specific; 'books' is more general and appropriate here. Also, 'most of the time' is better placed after 'usually' for clarity.

× Apart from this sometimes I read fictional books as the pin drop silence is there so I can easily concentrate on my work.

✓ Apart from this, sometimes I read fictional books as there is pin-drop silence, so I can easily concentrate on my work.

'The pin drop silence is there' is awkward; 'there is pin-drop silence' is the correct structure. Also, commas improve sentence clarity.

× Apart from this I I use some I sometimes read the books which enhance my vocabulary skills also.

✓ Apart from this, I sometimes read books which enhance my vocabulary skills also.

'The books' should be 'books' to indicate general reading. The sentence is corrected for clarity and redundancy removed.

× Yes, when I was child I usually go to library to read the books as as in my school time.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I usually went to the library to read books during my school time.

'Was child' needs the article 'a child'. 'Go' should be past tense 'went' to match 'was'. 'Library' needs 'the'. 'The books' changed to 'books' for general meaning. 'As as in my school time' corrected to 'during my school time'.

× I whenever I have some leisure time I usually go to the library as it helps me in my academic work also.

✓ Whenever I have some leisure time, I usually go to the library as it helps me in my academic work also.

Removed unnecessary 'I' at the start. The sentence is in present tense and is now grammatically correct.

× But there were also no novel and fiction type of books which which was very interesting at that time so.

✓ But there were no novels and fiction-type books, which were very interesting at that time.

'Novel' should be plural 'novels'. 'Fiction type of books' corrected to 'fiction-type books'. 'Which was' changed to 'which were' to agree with plural subject.

× Yes, as far I know Chinese kids usually go to library as they have their as it has them in their academic works.

✓ Yes, as far as I know, Chinese kids usually go to the library as it helps them in their academic work.

'As far I know' corrected to 'as far as I know'. 'Go to library' needs 'the library'. 'Have their as it has them' is unclear; corrected to 'helps them'. 'Academic works' changed to singular 'academic work'.

× Beside this I watch many Japanese and Chinese cartoon in which they often enjoy the library resources and they and it is very fun activity for them.

✓ Besides this, I watch many Japanese and Chinese cartoons in which they often enjoy the library resources, and it is a very fun activity for them.

'Beside' should be 'Besides'. 'Cartoon' should be plural 'cartoons'. Added commas for clarity. 'It is very fun activity' corrected to 'it is a very fun activity'.