Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library in my free time because I enjoy reading books. It is a fun and relaxing activity that helps me learn new things and improve my knowledge.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on giving a direct response with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

Example: Usually, I read various books in the library to improve my vocabulary. Besides that, I sometimes enjoy reading fictional stories because they are interesting and help me relax.

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid, especially during my school days. I usually spent time there reading novels and textbooks, which helped me with my academic studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion or information, use linking words, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Be specific and concise.

Example: I am not sure, but from what I have seen in Chinese and Japanese cartoons, children often visit libraries to do their academic work. They also use library resources to study and complete their assignments.

× Whenever I have a spare time, I go to library and it is very fun activity which I do in my leisure time.

✓ Whenever I have spare time, I go to the library and it is a very fun activity which I do in my leisure time.

The phrase 'a spare time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a' when used in this context. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Additionally, 'very fun activity' requires the article 'a' before 'very fun activity' as it is a singular countable noun phrase.

× Moreover, reading books are often very good and I am fond of reading it.

✓ Moreover, reading books is often very good and I am fond of reading them.

The subject 'reading books' is singular as a gerund phrase, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'reading it' is incorrect because 'books' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them'.

× Well, I do a lot of engine library but usually I read a lot read books which enhance my vocabulary.

✓ Well, I do a lot of reading in the library but usually I read many books which enhance my vocabulary.

The phrase 'do a lot of engine library' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'do a lot of reading in the library'. Also, 'read a lot read books' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'read many books' to correctly express quantity.

× Apart from this I I sometimes read fictional books in the library as there is paint drop sign and so I can consult him to marry them in the libraries.

✓ Apart from this, I sometimes read fictional books in the library as there is a 'quiet' sign and so I can concentrate on reading them in the library.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'paint drop sign' and 'consult him to marry them' which do not make sense. It likely intended to say 'quiet sign' and 'concentrate on reading them'. Also, 'libraries' should be singular 'library' to match the context.

× CS In my school time I go to oftenly go to library as it was as in my 3 times I usually spend time there.

✓ During my school time, I often went to the library as I usually spent time there three times a week.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense verbs 'go' and 'spend' when referring to past events. The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. Also, 'in my 3 times' is unclear and should be rephrased to 'three times a week' or similar.

× Moreover, it also helps me in my academic studies.

✓ Moreover, it also helps me with my academic studies.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'helps me with' is the correct collocation when referring to assistance in studies.

× Apart from this, I did a novel and textbooks over there.

✓ Apart from this, I read novels and textbooks there.

The verb 'did' is incorrect when referring to reading books; the correct past tense verb is 'read' (pronounced 'red'). Also, 'a novel and textbooks' is inconsistent in number; it should be 'novels and textbooks' or 'a novel and some textbooks'.

× As per my knowledge as I don't have much information about this but I sometimes I watch the Chinese and Japanese cartoons in which the children often they go to library for their academic work.

✓ As per my knowledge, I don't have much information about this, but sometimes I watch Chinese and Japanese cartoons in which the children often go to the library for their academic work.

The phrase 'children often they go' is redundant; either 'children often go' or 'they go' is correct. Also, 'the library' needs the definite article as it refers to a specific place.

× Apart from this, they also use their resources for the study material and also and there's.

✓ Apart from this, they also use their resources for study material and other purposes.

The phrase 'and also and there's' is incomplete and unclear. It should be rephrased to complete the thought. Also, 'study material' does not need 'the' here as it is used in a general sense.