Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like 'admire to read' and use simpler expressions. Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library in my hometown because I love reading books of various genres. It is a peaceful place where I can enjoy my favourite hobby and learn new things.

Suggestion: Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Instead of 'admire to read', say 'enjoy reading'. Also, explain clearly what you do in the library, not just what you like. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: In the library, I usually read books on history and fiction because they help me improve my basic knowledge and broaden my understanding of different topics.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating the same idea and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also' to connect your ideas. Try to be more specific about how history helped you.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because I loved reading fiction and history books. For example, fiction stories stimulated my imagination, and history books helped me understand the past better.

Suggestion: Your answer is short and could be more detailed. Avoid capitalising words unnecessarily and use more natural phrases like 'students' instead of 'pupils' or 'scholars'. Add reasons or examples to support your answer and use linking words.

Example: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because it is convenient and easily accessible. Moreover, libraries provide a quiet environment that helps students focus on their studies.

× Being a bibliophile person, I really admire to read numerous genre of books.

✓ Being a bibliophile person, I really admire reading numerous genres of books.

The verb 'admire' should be followed by the gerund form 'reading' instead of the infinitive 'to read'. Also, 'genre' should be plural 'genres' to match 'numerous'.

× Being a bibliophile person, I really admire to read numerous genre of books.

✓ Being a bibliophile person, I really admire reading numerous genres of books.

The noun 'genre' should be plural 'genres' because it is preceded by 'numerous', which indicates more than one.

× I really admire to read books of numerous genres like history and fiction that helps me to enhance my rudimentary information and expand my mental horizon about various aspects of life.

✓ I really admire reading books of numerous genres like history and fiction that help me enhance my rudimentary knowledge and expand my mental horizon about various aspects of life.

The verb 'admire' should be followed by the gerund 'reading' not 'to read'. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'books'. The phrase 'enhance my rudimentary information' is incorrect; 'knowledge' is more appropriate. The preposition 'to' after 'help' is unnecessary.

× I have been a bibliophile person since my childhood. Consequently, I used to go to the library when I was a child.

✓ I have been a bibliophile person since my childhood. Consequently, I used to go to the library when I was a child.

No correction needed here as the past tense 'used to go' is correctly used to describe habitual past action.

× I was really very fascinated towards reading fiction and history.

✓ I was really very fascinated by reading fiction and history.

The correct preposition after 'fascinated' is 'by', not 'towards'.

× Moreover, history really assisted me to enhance.

✓ Moreover, history really assisted me in enhancing my knowledge.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. 'Assisted me to enhance' is incorrect; it should be 'assisted me in enhancing' followed by the object 'my knowledge'.

× Definitely, Chinese pupils really prefer to go to the library as libraries are very convenient and easily accessible for The scholars here.

✓ Definitely, Chinese pupils really prefer to go to the library as libraries are very convenient and easily accessible for the scholars here.

The word 'The' should not be capitalized in the middle of the sentence; it should be 'the'.