Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Example: I used to go to the library often when I was in elementary school because I love reading books. However, nowadays I rarely visit the library because I don't have enough time to read.

Suggestion: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect your ideas. Avoid repetition and improve grammar for better clarity.

Example: When I go to the library, I usually look for books that interest me and spend time reading them. Also, if I need to prepare for exams, I find relevant study materials there.

Suggestion: Try to avoid unnecessary self-praise and focus on answering the question directly. Use proper grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Example: Yes, I went to the library often as a child because I enjoyed reading books and finding interesting study materials.

Suggestion: Avoid saying you don't know; instead, give a general opinion. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more natural and confident.

Example: I believe many Chinese kids visit libraries regularly because libraries are important places for learning and studying all over the world.

× I used to go library when I was in the elementary school and I would like to go the library because I like books very much

✓ I used to go to the library when I was in elementary school and I would like to go to the library because I like books very much

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'go' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating movement towards a place. Additionally, 'elementary school' does not need 'the' when speaking generally.

× but now I can't go at the library because in that time I don't have any time to read books

✓ but now I can't go to the library because at this time I don't have any time to read books

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'go' should be followed by 'to' when indicating movement towards a place. Also, 'in that time' is incorrect; 'at this time' is appropriate to indicate the current period.

× when I was in the library, I find some books which I'm interested in and I start reading, reading in it

✓ when I was in the library, I found some books which I was interested in and I started reading them

The verbs 'find' and 'start' should be in the past tense 'found' and 'started' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was in the library'. Also, 'reading in it' is incorrect; 'reading them' refers correctly to the books.

× if I want to prepare for my exam, I usually go to the library and find some books what I need and start finding some some things what I need

✓ if I want to prepare for my exam, I usually go to the library and find some books that I need and start finding some things that I need

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrect here; 'that' should be used to refer to the books and things needed.

× When I was a kid, I went library very often because I was a very smart kid and I liked reading a book and finding some interesting books or some some study materials when I was a kid

✓ When I was a kid, I went to the library very often because I was a very smart kid and I liked reading books and finding some interesting books or some study materials

The phrase 'went library' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'reading a book' is less natural here; 'reading books' is more appropriate when speaking generally. The repeated phrase 'some some' is a redundancy and should be corrected.

× I don't know what Chinese kids are doing because I don't have any information about Chinese people and their lives

✓ I don't know what Chinese kids do because I don't have any information about Chinese people and their lives

The phrase 'what Chinese kids are doing' is less appropriate here; 'what Chinese kids do' is better for general statements. This is more about tense usage but fits better with present tense for habitual actions.

× But I think some people goes in the library, of course, because library is things what all people needs all over the world

✓ But I think some people go to the library, of course, because the library is something that all people need all over the world

The verb 'goes' should be 'go' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. The preposition 'in' should be 'to' after 'go'. 'Library is things' is incorrect; 'the library is something' is correct. Also, 'what all people needs' should be 'that all people need' for correct relative pronoun and verb agreement.