List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use linking words to make it coherent and reduce redundancy (avoid repeating 'shopping' and 'helpful').

Example: Yes. I always make a shopping list on my phone before I go grocery shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, I group items by aisle in my notes so I can shop faster and not forget anything.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I do' → 'I do', 'I offer' unclear) and avoid long fragmented lists; use linking words ('for example', 'such as') to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I use a daily to‑do list for work and home tasks. For example, I write tasks on my phone—emails to send, and at home I note chores such as dishwashing and ironing—so I can track what I have completed and what remains.

Suggestion: This answer is repetitive and unclear because it repeats the same idea. The question asks why some people don't like lists, so give contrasting reasons (e.g., find them restrictive, forget to check them, prefer spontaneity) with linking words and one brief example.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive or too time‑consuming. For instance, someone who prefers to be spontaneous may feel a list limits their flexibility, while others simply forget to update it and then stop using it.

Suggestion: Be direct: state your preference, give one clear reason, and one brief example. Avoid fillers, repetition, and unfinished sentences. Use a linking word ('however'/'but') to contrast paper and phone if needed.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can edit them anytime. For example, when I remember something at work I add it to my notes immediately, so I rarely forget items at the store.

× I always make a list of the things which I have to buy when I go for the shopping or for grocery shopping.

✓ I always make a list of the things that I have to buy when I go shopping or grocery shopping.

Use of article 'the' before 'shopping' is unnecessary; 'go shopping' and 'grocery shopping' are fixed expressions. Also 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in defining relative clauses for clarity.

× I first of all make list in my notes in my phone.

✓ First of all, I make a list in the Notes app on my phone.

Missing article 'a' before 'list' and awkward phrase 'notes in my phone'. Use a comma after introductory phrase 'First of all' and a more natural noun phrase 'the Notes app on my phone'.

× That's very helpful for me.

✓ That is very helpful for me.

Contraction is acceptable in speech, but for a clear corrected sentence use full form 'That is'. This sentence itself is grammatically correct aside from style; change is optional.

× Yes, Ioffer daily work.

✓ Yes, I offer daily work.

There is a missing space between 'I' and 'offer'. Also the sentence is unclear; if meaning is 'I do daily work' or 'I work daily' those alternatives are more natural.

× I make list of To Do List on my phone or even on a paper.

✓ I make a to-do list on my phone or on paper.

Use article and hyphenation: 'a to-do list'. 'On paper' is more natural than 'on a paper'. Avoid redundancy by not repeating 'list'.

× The things I've done, the things which I have do next day, the task which I have to perform the next day, like dishwashing, laundry, like this ironing.

✓ The things I've done, the things I have to do the next day, and the tasks I have to perform the next day, such as dishwashing, laundry, and ironing.

'Have do' is incorrect; should be 'have to do'. Use plural 'tasks' to match list. Use 'such as' for examples and parallel structure (dishwashing, laundry, and ironing). Also replace 'which' with 'that' or omit for conciseness.

× I make list of these things so I don't forget.

✓ I make a list of these things so I don't forget.

Missing article 'a' before 'list'.

× Some people like to make lists of the things or the chores they have to do the next day because it's convenient for them or helpful for them or very very convenient for them to remember the things they have to do the next day or for the remembrance they make the list.

✓ Some people make lists of chores they have to do the next day because it helps them remember and is convenient.

The original is repetitive and awkward. Simplify by removing redundancy ('or helpful...very very convenient') and 'for the remembrance' is incorrect; use 'helps them remember'. Keep concise parallel structure.

× Firstly, I usually make a list on the paper, but nowadays I love to make a list on the notes in my phone and it's very convenient and helpful and and and then I remember all the things I have to do for the grocery or and I don't don't forget and it's very helpful for me.

✓ At first I used to make a list on paper, but nowadays I prefer to use the Notes app on my phone because it is convenient and helps me remember everything I have to buy, so I do not forget.

Fix repeated words ('and and and', 'don't don't'), article errors ('on the paper' -> 'on paper'), word choice ('love' -> 'prefer' for habitual action), and clarify 'for the grocery' to 'everything I have to buy'. Use consistent tense and proper adverb placement.

× And then I got the those things which.

✓ Then I get those things that I need.

Original is incomplete and ungrammatical ('got the those things which'). Use present simple 'get' to match habitual action and complete the clause with 'that I need'.