List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., Yes, I usually make a shopping list), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “not app is in mobile”); instead say “there is a notes app on my phone.” Aim for 2–3 short sentences, correct basic grammar (make → make/making; show → shop).

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. I do this because I often forget items, so using the notes app on my phone helps me remember everything and save time at the store.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize ideas: start with a clear statement (Yes, I make work lists) then explain how and why they help, using linking words (for example, because, therefore). Correct grammar (it work → it works; phrase me → praise me; do not end annoyed → are not annoyed). Use specific detail about a typical task and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work and it works well. For example, when I have an urgent project with a tight deadline, I break tasks down into a checklist and complete them one by one. As a result, I meet deadlines and my manager often praises my organization.

Suggestion: Give a clear main idea (e.g., Some people avoid lists because they find them stressful) and then provide one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid repeating words like “shame/shamed” and choose appropriate vocabulary (embarrassed, stressed). Keep sentences concise and natural.

Example: Some people avoid making lists because they find them stressful; for example, if they forget an item from a work checklist they may feel embarrassed. Others prefer more flexible approaches to planning, so they rely on memory or spontaneous decisions.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement (I prefer using my phone) and give 1–2 clear reasons with linking words (for example, because, so). Use correct phrases (notes app, lose them) and avoid repetition. Keep it to two or three sentences and use specific examples of convenience (syncing, editing).

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and secure. For example, using the notes app lets me edit items easily and I don't have to worry about losing a paper list.

× In retrospect I would make a list when I show because I forget a lot of things such as grocery.

✓ In retrospect I would make a list when I shop because I forget a lot of things such as groceries.

The sentence uses 'show' instead of the correct verb 'shop' (wrong word choice) and 'grocery' should be plural 'groceries' because it refers to multiple items. This matches 'Verb in the present participle form' indirectly by verb choice and plural noun form; correct the verb to 'shop' and the noun to 'groceries'. Suggestion: replace incorrect verb with the correct one and use the plural form for items you buy.

× Now not app is in mobile.

✓ Now the notes app is on my mobile.

The original is ungrammatical and misorders words: 'not app' should be 'notes app' (noun) and the preposition should be 'on' for devices. This fits 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' because word forms and placement are wrong. Use 'the notes app is on my mobile'. Suggestion: use correct noun form 'notes' and preposition 'on'.

× In modern fashionable era not app is in mobile.

✓ In the modern era, the notes app is on my mobile.

'Modern fashionable era' is redundant and awkward; use 'the modern era'. 'Not app' should be 'notes app' and preposition 'on' is required. This is an adjective/adverb misuse and word choice error. Simplify to 'In the modern era, the notes app is on my mobile.' Suggestion: avoid redundant adjectives and use correct noun and preposition.

× So it may convenient and also I can I can write on in the note app so it might easy for me when I shop.

✓ So it may be convenient and I can write in the Notes app, so it might be easier for me when I shop.

Missing auxiliary 'be' after 'may' and missing 'be' before 'easy'; 'note app' should be 'Notes app'; use comparative 'easier' rather than 'easy' for comparison. This matches present participle/verb form issues; add necessary forms 'be' and use correct comparative. Suggestion: include auxiliary verbs and correct adjective form 'easier'.

× Say make a list for my work and definitely it work.

✓ I make a list for my work and definitely it works.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it work' should be 'it works' because third person singular requires -s. This is classified here as adjective/adverb misuse but actually is subject-verb agreement; corrected to 'it works'. Suggestion: add -s for third person singular verbs.

× For example I have a lot of work in such as urgent project in a project which which has deadlines.

✓ For example, I have a lot of work, such as an urgent project that has deadlines.

Awkward and repetitive structure: 'in such as urgent project in a project which which' is incorrect. Rephrase to 'such as an urgent project that has deadlines' to fix sentence structure errors. Suggestion: remove repetition and use 'such as' followed by a noun phrase.

× So first of all I make a list and complete that project.

✓ So first of all I make a list and complete the project.

'That project' is acceptable but 'the project' is more natural here; verb forms are fine. Classified as present participle/verb form area though change is stylistic for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the project' for clarity.

× So it might be easy for me because my manager phrase me and do not end annoyed on me.

✓ So it might be easy for me because my manager praises me and does not get annoyed with me.

'Phrase me' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'praise'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'do not end annoyed on me' is ungrammatical. Use 'does not get annoyed with me'. This matches 'Incorrect use of pronouns' broadly as wrong verb and constructions; corrected verbs and preposition 'with'. Suggestion: use 'praises' for third person singular and 'get annoyed with' for the phrase.

× Some people do not make a list because it is stressful and for example, when you make list and you forget at work, so it might be very shame, you feel shamed and however you feel a lot of stress.

✓ Some people do not make a list because it is stressful. For example, when you make a list and forget it at work, it can be very embarrassing and you feel ashamed, so you feel a lot of stress.

Missing articles ('make list' -> 'make a list'), incorrect adjective forms ('shame' -> 'embarrassing', 'shamed' -> 'ashamed'). This fits 'Singular and plural issue' for article use and noun forms; correct the articles and adjective choices. Suggestion: use articles before singular countable nouns and correct adjective/adverb forms.

× So some people like some people really want to make list because they want to organize themselves, but others do not.

✓ Some people really want to make lists because they want to organize themselves, but others do not.

Repetition 'some people like some people' and missing plural 'list' should be 'lists'. This is a sentence structure error and pluralization issue; simplify and pluralize 'lists'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use plural form for general statements.

× I prefer make a list on phone because it is more convenient than on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient than paper.

After 'prefer', use the infinitive 'to make' or gerund 'making'; include possessive 'my phone'. This matches verb form issue. Use 'paper' without 'on' after 'than'. Suggestion: use 'prefer to make' or 'prefer making' and include possessive when referring to personal device.

× For example, when I keep when I keep list on paper so I feel embarrassed because of I worry about forgetting or losing them.

✓ For example, when I keep a list on paper, I feel embarrassed because I worry about forgetting or losing it.

Duplicate phrase 'when I keep' removed; 'keep list' needs article 'a list'; 'because of I worry' is incorrect—use 'because I worry'; 'them' should be 'it' if referring to 'a list'. This is a preposition and pronoun reference issue. Suggestion: use correct articles and pronouns matching singular/plural and remove redundant phrases.

× So it is risky for me.

✓ So it is risky for me.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. Classified here to indicate pronoun usage is acceptable. Suggestion: none.

× And in mobile not app is convenient so I I always make a list on.

✓ And the notes app on my mobile is convenient, so I always make a list on it.

Original misorders words ('in mobile not app') and ends abruptly. Use 'the notes app on my mobile' and add object 'it'. This is adjective/adverb and word order misuse. Suggestion: use correct word order 'the notes app on my mobile' and include the pronoun 'it' to complete the sentence.