List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay focused and prevents me from spending money on unnecessary items.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid vague expressions and be more specific.

Example: When I have many tasks, I make a list prioritizing them from most to least important, and this method always helps me manage my work effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Use correct verb forms and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about the reasons and effects.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because it can make them feel overwhelmed or stressed by seeing many unfinished tasks. However, I prefer making lists as they help me stay organized and focused.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use linking words and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

Example: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I often lose paper lists, and I always carry my phone with me, so my list is accessible anytime I need it.

× it saved me, save me and my money from spending on unnecess, unnecessary things

✓ it saves me and my money from spending on unnecessary things

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so the present tense 'saves' should be used instead of the past tense 'saved'. Also, 'save me' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× when I have lots of thing to do

✓ when I have lots of things to do

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items or tasks.

× I make it list so that I can characterize which is more preferable, which is less preferable

✓ I make a list so that I can categorize which is more preferable and which is less preferable

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used before 'list'; it should be 'a list'. Also, 'characterize' is not appropriate here; 'categorize' fits better.

× I write that list in the form of preference

✓ I write that list in order of preference

The phrase 'in the form of preference' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'in order of preference' to indicate ranking.

× some people might don't like making a list

✓ some people might not like making a list

The modal verb 'might' should be followed by the base form of the verb with 'not' for negation, so 'might not like' is correct instead of 'might don't like'.

× because it make them more confused or make them stressed

✓ because it makes them more confused or makes them stressed

The verb should agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'make' should be 'makes'.

× It helped me and keep me in the track on and also help me to focus

✓ It helps me and keeps me on track and also helps me to focus

The sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense verbs 'helps' and 'keeps' should be used instead of past tense 'helped' and 'keep'. Also, 'in the track on' is incorrect; it should be 'on track'.

× keep me in the track on

✓ keep me on track

The correct preposition is 'on' not 'in' and the phrase is 'on track' meaning staying focused or on schedule.

× I sometime lost the papers

✓ I sometimes lose the papers

The adverb 'sometimes' is plural and the verb should be in present tense 'lose' to match the habitual action.

× I can carry mobile everywhere every time

✓ I can carry my mobile everywhere all the time

The sentence needs possessive pronoun 'my' before 'mobile' and 'every time' should be 'all the time' to express continuous frequency.