Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Definitely, as I think it's a good habit when I go shopping by myself I will do a list to help me remember some important things because I think I'm not good at memorize things.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Oh, I will say yes, because I need to do some complex things in my work, so I often made a list to help me. I think it's it's very useful.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Maybe I think this kind of people will think make a list as troublesome and they like random randomly things so they don't want to be ordered.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make a list on my because I think it's convenient. I use my phone almost every day, no matter no matter how. Whenever and whatever I will use my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然,但句子结构较长且有语法错误,建议简化句子并注意语法,如动词形式和冠词使用。
Example: Yes, I always make a list when I shop alone because it helps me remember important items. I find it difficult to memorize everything without a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中时态不一致,且表达重复,建议使用一致的时态并避免重复词汇。
Example: Yes, I often make lists at work because my tasks are complex. Making lists helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 表达不够清晰,语法和词汇使用有误,建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构来表达观点。
Example: Some people find making lists troublesome because they prefer to do things spontaneously and dislike strict schedules.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复,且表达不完整,建议完整表达观点并避免重复。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient. I use my phone daily, so it's easy to access my lists anytime and anywhere.
× I think I'm not good at memorize things.
✓ I think I'm not good at memorizing things.
动词短语 'good at' 后面应接动名词形式,不能用动词原形。这里 'memorize' 应改为 'memorizing'。
× I often made a list to help me.
✓ I often make a list to help me.
句子描述的是经常性的动作,应使用一般现在时 'make',而不是过去时 'made'。
× Maybe I think this kind of people will think make a list as troublesome and they like random randomly things so they don't want to be ordered.
✓ Maybe I think this kind of people will think making a list is troublesome and they like random things so they don't want to be ordered.
'this kind of people' 应改为 'this kind of people'(可接受,但更自然是 'these kinds of people'),'think make a list as troublesome' 结构错误,应改为 'think making a list is troublesome','random randomly things' 中 'randomly' 是副词,修饰名词应使用形容词 'random'。
× I prefer to make a list on my because I think it's convenient.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's convenient.
句子中缺少名词,'my' 后应接名词 'phone',否则句子不完整。