List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant phrases. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need or find interesting at the store. However, sometimes this leads me to buy unnecessary items.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how making lists helps you. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'you know'.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, especially because I'm learning English and have many tasks. Writing them down on paper helps me stay organized, and I can check off each task as I complete it.

Suggestion: Your answer does not address the question asked. Instead, you talk about yourself. Try to answer the question directly by giving possible reasons why some people dislike making lists, and support your ideas with examples or explanations.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel restricted by plans. Others might prefer to be spontaneous and flexible throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite clear and relevant but could be improved by organizing ideas more logically and using linking words. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and try to be more concise.

Example: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone since I always have it with me. However, because of distractions like social media, I sometimes write my lists on paper to focus better.

× Actually, I don't have any specific list anytime I go to shopping and you know every time I have been going to shopping without analyst and I start to buy something that have good souls and justice.

✓ Actually, I don't have any specific list anytime I go shopping and you know every time I have been going shopping without analysis and I start to buy something that has good souls and justice.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'without analyst' is incorrect; it should be 'without analysis' to convey the intended meaning. Additionally, 'something that have' should be 'something that has' to agree with the singular subject 'something'. These prepositional and verb agreement errors affect clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually, I don't have any specific list anytime I go to shopping and you know every time I have been going to shopping without analyst and I start to buy something that have good souls and justice.

✓ Actually, I don't have any specific list anytime I go shopping and you know every time I have been going shopping without analysis and I start to buy something that has good souls and justice.

The phrase 'something that have' is incorrect because 'something' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has'. Using 'have' here is a singular and plural issue affecting subject-verb agreement.

× Most of the time I make a list for my works because you know, nowadays I'm learning English and I have a lot of different works to do for that.

✓ Most of the time I make a list for my work because you know, nowadays I'm learning English and I have a lot of different work to do for that.

The word 'works' is incorrectly pluralized here. 'Work' as an uncountable noun refers to tasks or jobs in general and should not be pluralized. Using 'works' is a singular and plural issue.

× And most of the time it work, you know, I write, wrote all of my work on paper and I take all of them at the end of the day.

✓ And most of the time it works, you know, I write all of my work on paper and I take all of them at the end of the day.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'works' in the third person singular form. Using 'work' here is a third person singular issue. Also, 'write, wrote' is inconsistent; 'write' fits better in present tense here.

× And most of the time it work, you know, I write, wrote all of my work on paper and I take all of them at the end of the day.

✓ And most of the time it works, you know, I write all of my work on paper and I take all of them at the end of the day.

The phrase 'write, wrote' is confusing and inconsistent. Since the context is habitual action, the present tense 'write' is appropriate. Using 'wrote' here is a past tense issue.

× No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who make a list before every might before my works, you know, I can know all of my day plan with writing down on paper.

✓ No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who makes a list every night before my work, you know, I can know all of my day plan by writing it down on paper.

The pronoun 'who make' should be 'who makes' to agree with singular 'person'. 'Every might' is a typo for 'every night'. 'My works' should be 'my work' as uncountable. 'With writing down' should be 'by writing it down' to correctly use pronouns and prepositions. These are incorrect use of pronouns and related errors.

× No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who make a list before every might before my works, you know, I can know all of my day plan with writing down on paper.

✓ No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who makes a list every night before my work, you know, I can know all of my day plan by writing it down on paper.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. This is a third person singular issue.

× No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who make a list before every might before my works, you know, I can know all of my day plan with writing down on paper.

✓ No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who makes a list every night before my work, you know, I can know all of my day plan by writing it down on paper.

The phrase 'with writing down on paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by' as in 'by writing it down on paper'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who make a list before every might before my works, you know, I can know all of my day plan with writing down on paper.

✓ No, I can't give any information about this person because I'm the kind of person who makes a list every night before my work, you know, I can know all of my day plan by writing it down on paper.

The phrase 'all of my day plan' should be 'all of my day's plan' or 'my entire day plan' for clarity, but the main issue is 'works' which should be singular 'work'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Generally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I bring my phone everywhere I go.

✓ Generally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I bring my phone everywhere I go.

This sentence is correct; no prepositional errors found.

× But you know, I have a lot of social media apps on my phone and I can't focus on my plans on my phone, so I have to write them on paper and bring them by myself.

✓ But you know, I have a lot of social media apps on my phone and I can't focus on my plans on my phone, so I have to write them on paper and bring them with me.

The phrase 'bring them by myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'bring them with me'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and reflexive pronouns.