List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer wa chotto fukuzatsu de, 'before when I go to shop' no imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto shizen de, tadashii bunpou de kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Mata, motto shousai na riyuu ya jouhou wo tsuika shite, kotae wo fukameru koto ga dekimasu.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

Suggestion: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, hanashi no nagare ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, shougai ni kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Tatoeba, shigoto ga nai baai wa sou iu koto wo meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

Example: I am currently not working, so I don't make lists for work. As for studying, I sometimes make lists to organize my tasks.

Suggestion: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, bunpou to hanashikata wo kaizen suru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Motto meikaku ni, riyuu wo setsumei shi, renraku no kotoba wo tsukatte hanasu to yoku narimasu.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because unexpected things can happen, making the list less useful sometimes.

Suggestion: Kotae wa wakari yasui desu ga, 'Or your phone' no bun ga fukuzatsu de, seikaku ni shite kudasai. Motto shousai na riyuu to, renraku no kotoba wo tsukatte kotae wo fukameru koto ga dekimasu.

Example: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because I want to reduce screen time and enjoy a digital detox.

× Yes, I do. I do it before when I go to shop.

✓ Yes, I do. I do it before I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which is a gerund used after 'go' to indicate the activity. Also, 'before when' is redundant; 'before I go shopping' is correct.

× First of all, I'm not working so I don't and.

✓ First of all, I'm not working so I don't make a list.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. The phrase 'I don't and' is incorrect. It should specify the action, e.g., 'I don't make a list.' This corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× About study also, I don't know.

✓ About studying, I also don't know.

The phrase 'About study also' is awkward. Using the gerund 'studying' after 'about' is correct. Also, 'I also don't know' is a clearer word order.

× Because it doesn't work sometimes, you know, something happens suddenly something expect something not expected.

✓ Because it doesn't work sometimes, you know, something happens suddenly, something unexpected occurs.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'Something expect something not expected' is incorrect. It should be 'something unexpected occurs' to convey the meaning clearly.

× Or your phone. I prefer to make a list on paper because I don't like a phone.

✓ On my phone. I prefer to make a list on paper because I don't like using my phone.

'Or your phone' is unclear and should be 'On my phone' to answer the question properly. Also, 'I don't like a phone' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like using my phone' to express dislike of the device usage.