Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I will make the dish when I was shopping because it makes me more specific know what things or what objects I will buy.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes I do make the list will help me more exactly know what the work and what the things I will do and arrange the appointments.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Maybe some people is casual emotion and they don't like to arrange a lot of things. I think that is very, very pressure and very complex.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make the disk on my phone because. I always take my phone and the paper. Maybe I'll forget to bring so I prefer to make this on my phone. MMM.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式,同时避免冗余。
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,建议简洁明了地说明做清单的作用,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and schedule appointments efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 表达不自然且语法错误较多,建议用更准确的词汇描述原因,并注意句子结构的完整性。
Example: Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer a more relaxed approach and find planning stressful and complicated.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,建议使用完整句子并清晰表达偏好和原因。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't forget my list.
× Yes, I will make the dish when I was shopping because it makes me more specific know what things or what objects I will buy.
✓ Yes, I made the list when I was shopping because it helps me know more specifically what things or objects I will buy.
这里时态混用,'will make'是将来时,而'when I was shopping'是过去时,时态不一致。应使用过去时'made'。另外,'make the dish'应为'make the list',符合语境。'more specific know'应改为'know more specifically',语序错误。
× Yes I do make the list will help me more exactly know what the work and what the things I will do and arrange the appointments.
✓ Yes, I do make the list which helps me know more exactly what work I have to do and arrange the appointments.
句子结构混乱,缺少连接词,'will help'应改为'which helps',使句子完整。'more exactly know'语序错误,应为'know more exactly'。'what the work'应为'what work','the'使用错误。
× Maybe some people is casual emotion and they don't like to arrange a lot of things.
✓ Maybe some people are casual and emotional and they don't like to arrange a lot of things.
主语'some people'为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。'casual emotion'搭配不当,应改为'casual and emotional'。
× I think that is very, very pressure and very complex.
✓ I think that is very, very stressful and very complicated.
'pressure'是名词,不能直接用作形容词,应使用形容词'stressful'。'complex'用作形容词,但在此语境下用'complicated'更合适。
× I prefer to make the disk on my phone because. I always take my phone and the paper. Maybe I'll forget to bring so I prefer to make this on my phone. MMM.
✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I always take my phone but not the paper. Maybe I'll forget to bring it, so I prefer to make the list on my phone.
'disk'应为'list',符合语境。句子断裂,'because.'后不应有句号。'the paper'前缺少冠词,且表达不清,应改为'but not the paper'。'forget to bring'后应加宾语'it'。'make this'应改为'make the list',保持一致。