List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and clarity. Try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy." Also, avoid vague phrases like "how to buy and anything else."

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy and saves me time in the store.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and explain why lists help you. For example, "Yes, I always make a to-do list at work because I have many tasks and it helps me stay organised." Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I always make a to-do list at work because I have many tasks to complete, and it helps me stay organised and manage my time effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome or they forget to check them, so they don't find lists helpful." Use linking words to clarify your points.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming, and sometimes they forget to look at the list, which makes it ineffective for them.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to clearly state your preference and reasons. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit. Paper lists are also useful but less flexible."

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily add or remove items. However, sometimes I use paper lists when I want to see everything at a glance.

× Yes, I will make a list before going shopping because I think make a list will help me remember how to buy and anything else.

✓ Yes, I make a list before going shopping because I think making a list helps me remember what to buy and other things.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will' to express a habitual action, which is better expressed in the present simple tense. Also, 'make a list' should be in the gerund form 'making a list' after 'think'. Additionally, 'how to buy and anything else' is unclear; it should be 'what to buy and other things' for clarity.

× Yeah, I always make a list of my work because in my work there are a lot of different things will destroy my schedule.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list of my work because there are a lot of different things at work that can disrupt my schedule.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'there are' with 'will destroy' without proper structure. The phrase 'in my work' is better expressed as 'at work'. Also, 'will destroy' is too strong and awkward; 'can disrupt' is more appropriate. The sentence structure needed correction to properly link the clauses.

× So clearly list will help.

✓ So a clear list will help.

The original sentence lacks an article before 'list' and uses 'clearly' incorrectly as an adjective. 'Clearly' is an adverb; the correct adjective is 'clear'. Also, 'list' is a singular countable noun and requires an article 'a'.

× Yeah, I think many people will be make a list, it's a trouble and we'll forget it the least and it is not helpful for their work on other things.

✓ Yeah, I think many people don't like to make a list because it's troublesome, they often forget it, and it is not helpful for their work or other things.

The phrase 'will be make a list' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'don't like to make a list'. 'It's a trouble' should be 'it's troublesome' or 'it's a trouble'. 'We'll forget it the least' is unclear; 'they often forget it' is clearer. Also, 'for their work on other things' should be 'for their work or other things'.

× I always use a lid in mobile phone because use mobile phone is very convenient and it can't change many things and then newspaper is always very proper to do that.

✓ I always use an app on my mobile phone because using a mobile phone is very convenient and it can't be changed easily; also, newspapers are always very suitable for that.

The phrase 'use a lid in mobile phone' is incorrect; likely intended 'use an app on my mobile phone'. 'Use mobile phone' should be 'using a mobile phone'. 'It can't change many things' is unclear; 'it can't be changed easily' is better. 'Newspaper is always very proper to do that' should be 'newspapers are always very suitable for that'. Prepositions and article usage needed correction.