List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. For example, say "I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember things easily." Also, avoid unnecessary words like "for a shopping."

Example: I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to directly answer and support with clear reasons. For example, "Yes, I always make a list for my work because nowadays people are very busy and it helps me remember my tasks easily."

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks, especially since people are very busy these days.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using linking words and clearer structure. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time, and they believe their sharp memory is enough to remember things."

Example: Some people avoid making lists because they feel it wastes time, and they trust their sharp memory to remember everything.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammar mistakes. Try to be concise and use linking words. For example, "In this digital era, most people prefer making lists on their phones. I also prefer my phone because I often forget where I put my paper and pen, but I always have my phone with me."

Example: Most people nowadays make lists on their phones. I prefer this too because I often forget my paper and pen, but I always carry my phone.

× Well, I always make a list when I go for a shopping because it's helped me to remember things easily.

✓ Well, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to remember things easily.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct expression. Also, 'it's helped' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'it helps' because the habit is ongoing.

× Yes, I always make a list and its really works because most of the people nowadays busy in their own different types of work and they all they get they didn't get to remember anything so it works easily.

✓ Yes, I always make a list and it really works because most people nowadays are busy with their own different types of work and they don't get to remember anything, so it works easily.

The pronoun 'its' should be 'it' as the subject. 'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. The verb 'busy' needs 'are' to be correct. 'They all they get they didn't get to remember anything' is unclear and corrected to 'they don't get to remember anything' to fit present tense and clarity.

× Because they think it is a wastage of time and because and they have a sharp mind so they can easily remember the things.

✓ Because they think it is a wastage of time and they have a sharp mind, so they can easily remember things.

The phrase 'and because and' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'and'. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' here for natural usage.

× Well, in this digital era, most of the people always try to making a list on their phone.

✓ Well, in this digital era, most people always try to make a list on their phone.

After 'try to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'try to making' is incorrect; it should be 'try to make'.

× And I also prefer to make a list on my phone because I, uh, sometimes I didn't remember where I get my paper and pen.

✓ And I also prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I don't remember where I put my paper and pen.

The phrase 'I didn't remember' is past tense but the context is present habitual action, so 'I don't remember' is correct. Also, 'where I get my paper and pen' is incorrect; it should be 'where I put my paper and pen' to indicate location.