Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. This is because I prefer to buy things simultaneously rather than planning everything in advance. This way we can choose some items based on the mood and the needs at the moment.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yeah, I have many tests to be completed every day, so I need to make a list to stay organized and avoid forgetting important work. Overall, it proves my work productivity.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think some people don't like making lists because their plans are over change, unexpected events, activities come up so they find it difficult for follow a strict schedule.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Besides some very very important events, I I, I don't I usually don't make a list both for people and phones.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显重复,且部分表达不够简洁。建议减少冗余,使用更流畅的连接词,使表达更连贯。
Example: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy items spontaneously based on my current mood and needs, which makes the experience more flexible and enjoyable.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答直接,但表达不够清晰,部分语法错误影响理解。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,明确说明列表如何帮助提高效率。
Example: Yes, I make a list every day to organize my tasks and ensure I don't forget anything important, which significantly improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议加强句子结构,使用连接词使逻辑更清晰,并注意语法准确性。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because their plans often change due to unexpected events, making it hard to stick to a strict schedule.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不够清晰且有重复语音,表达混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并说明原因。
Example: I rarely make lists, whether on paper or my phone, except for very important events when I need to stay organized.
× I think some people don't like making lists because their plans are over change, unexpected events, activities come up so they find it difficult for follow a strict schedule.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because their plans are often changed, unexpected events and activities come up, so they find it difficult to follow a strict schedule.
这里“plans are over change”表达不正确,应该用被动语态“plans are often changed”表示计划经常被改变。此外,缺少连词“and”连接“unexpected events”和“activities”,以及“for follow”应改为“不定式to follow”。这些都是单复数和介词使用的问题。
× I think some people don't like making lists because their plans are over change, unexpected events, activities come up so they find it difficult for follow a strict schedule.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because their plans are often changed, unexpected events and activities come up, so they find it difficult to follow a strict schedule.
“for follow”是不正确的介词搭配,正确用法是不带介词的动词不定式“to follow”。
× Besides some very very important events, I I, I don't I usually don't make a list both for people and phones.
✓ Besides some very, very important events, I usually don't make a list either on paper or on my phone.
原句中“both for people and phones”表达不清且错误,应改为“either on paper or on my phone”表示“要么用纸,要么用手机”,这里涉及单复数和介词的正确使用。
× Besides some very very important events, I I, I don't I usually don't make a list both for people and phones.
✓ Besides some very, very important events, I usually don't make a list either on paper or on my phone.
原句中“I I, I don't I”重复且混乱,属于代词使用错误,应简化为“I usually don't”。