List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repetition such as "I will forget and I will buy" and "in in". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you could say: "Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember essential items and avoid buying unnecessary things, which saves money."

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the essential items and prevents me from buying things I don't need, so I save money.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use formal language instead of "gonna" and improve sentence flow with linking words. For example, start with a topic sentence, then explain the benefits of making a list for work.

Example: Yes, I make a list when I have important appointments. This helps me plan the treatments I need to perform, save time, and ensure I can see all my patients efficiently during the day.

Suggestion: Your answer shows some ideas but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Avoid vague phrases like "I don't know" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Example: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and avoid the pressure of following a strict plan. They might find that going with the flow works better for them.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to be more concise and correct, for example, use "easier" instead of "more easy" and avoid repeating ideas. Use linking words to connect your points.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier and more practical. Since I always have my phone with me, I can access my list anytime, which saves me time compared to using a notebook.

× So usually I write down every time I go to shopping the essential items and that help me to buy everything I need and not waste money in in.

✓ So usually I write down every time I go shopping the essential items and that helps me to buy everything I need and not waste money on it.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed directly by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'that help me' should be 'that helps me' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Additionally, 'waste money in in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' and the repetition of 'in' is an error.

× So usually I write down every time I go to shopping the essential items and that help me to buy everything I need and not waste money in in.

✓ So usually I write down every time I go shopping the essential items and that helps me to buy everything I need and not waste money on it.

The verb 'help' must agree with its singular subject 'that', so it should be 'helps'. This is a third person singular subject-verb agreement issue.

× So usually I write down every time I go to shopping the essential items and that help me to buy everything I need and not waste money in in.

✓ So usually I write down every time I go shopping the essential items and that helps me to buy everything I need and not waste money on it.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used twice; the correct preposition to use with 'waste money' is 'on'. Also, the repetition of 'in' is a typographical error.

× When I have important appointments, yes, of course I make a list to know what treatments I'm gonna do and as well to make a plan, saving the time and to be able to treat everyone which I'm gonna be seeing in that day.

✓ When I have important appointments, yes, of course I make a list to know what treatments I'm going to do and also to make a plan, saving time and to be able to treat everyone whom I'm going to see that day.

The informal contraction 'gonna' should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, 'which' is incorrectly used instead of 'whom' as the object of the verb 'see'. 'Saving the time' should be 'saving time' as 'time' is uncountable here.

× When I have important appointments, yes, of course I make a list to know what treatments I'm gonna do and as well to make a plan, saving the time and to be able to treat everyone which I'm gonna be seeing in that day.

✓ When I have important appointments, yes, of course I make a list to know what treatments I'm going to do and also to make a plan, saving time and to be able to treat everyone whom I'm going to see that day.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used to refer to people; the correct pronoun is 'whom' as it is the object of the verb 'see'.

× When I have important appointments, yes, of course I make a list to know what treatments I'm gonna do and as well to make a plan, saving the time and to be able to treat everyone which I'm gonna be seeing in that day.

✓ When I have important appointments, yes, of course I make a list to know what treatments I'm going to do and also to make a plan, saving time and to be able to treat everyone whom I'm going to see that day.

The phrase 'in that day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'that day' without 'in'.

× I believe they are more spontaneous and they don't want to have the pressure that they have to do this, so they just leave.

✓ I believe they are more spontaneous and they don't want to have the pressure that they have to do this, so they just let things happen.

The verb 'leave' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'let things happen' or 'go with the flow'. 'Leave' does not fit the context of not wanting pressure.

× They leave how the routine will go and maybe in that way they is more successful for them, I don't know.

✓ They leave how the routine will go and maybe in that way it is more successful for them, I don't know.

The subject 'they' does not agree with the verb 'is'; it should be 'they are' or the subject should be changed to 'it' to agree with 'is'. Here, 'it is' is appropriate referring to 'that way'.

× They leave how the routine will go and maybe in that way they is more successful for them, I don't know.

✓ They leave how the routine will go and maybe in that way it is more successful for them, I don't know.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used; 'it' should be used to refer to 'that way'.

× I prefer my phone because is more easy and practical as I have my notebook and my phone so that makes me saves me time and as well is accessible in every moment as we our phones are with us all the time and a notebook.

✓ I prefer my phone because it is easier and more practical as I have my notebook and my phone, so that saves me time and it is accessible at every moment since our phones are with us all the time, unlike a notebook.

The adjective 'easy' should be in comparative form 'easier' to compare. 'Is more easy' is incorrect. Also, 'makes me saves me' is redundant and incorrect; 'saves me' is sufficient. 'Accessible in every moment' should be 'accessible at every moment'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer my phone because is more easy and practical as I have my notebook and my phone so that makes me saves me time and as well is accessible in every moment as we our phones are with us all the time and a notebook.

✓ I prefer my phone because it is easier and more practical as I have my notebook and my phone, so that saves me time and it is accessible at every moment since our phones are with us all the time, unlike a notebook.

The verb 'is' requires the subject 'it' before it. Also, 'makes me saves me' is incorrect; 'makes me save time' or simply 'saves me time' is correct.