List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Also, it prevents me from wasting money on unnecessary items, so I can choose better products.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và sắp xếp câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, đồng thời cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách bạn sử dụng danh sách.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my studies because they help me organize my daily tasks and manage my schedule effectively.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they are not disciplined or they tend to procrastinate, which makes it hard for them to stick to a plan.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ và giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích viết trên giấy hơn.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me remember better. Also, I might forget or lose my phone, so paper lists feel more reliable to me.

× Yes, because it makes it helps me remember what I want to buy and I can avoid the avoid wasting money about the unnecessary thing and I can choose the good thing or the.

✓ Yes, because it helps me remember what I want to buy and I can avoid wasting money on unnecessary things and I can choose good things.

The phrase 'makes it helps' is incorrect; 'helps' alone is sufficient. 'Avoid the avoid wasting money about' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'avoid wasting money on'. 'The unnecessary thing' should be plural 'unnecessary things' to match the context. 'Choose the good thing or the' is incomplete and should be 'choose good things'. The corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, because it makes it helps me remember what I want to buy and I can avoid the avoid wasting money about the unnecessary thing and I can choose the good thing or the.

✓ Yes, because it helps me remember what I want to buy and I can avoid wasting money on unnecessary things and I can choose good things.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used after 'wasting money'; the correct preposition is 'on'. This change is necessary to convey the correct meaning.

× Yes, because it makes it helps me remember what I want to buy and I can avoid the avoid wasting money about the unnecessary thing and I can choose the good thing or the.

✓ Yes, because it helps me remember what I want to buy and I can avoid wasting money on unnecessary things and I can choose good things.

The phrase 'the unnecessary thing' should be plural 'unnecessary things' because it refers to multiple items. Similarly, 'the good thing' should be 'good things' to match the context.

× Yes, of course, uh, because, and I make a list for my study because I'm a student and I need to make a list to know, uh, what's what thing I can, I must do in the routine or the, uh, other schedule in my.

✓ Yes, of course, I make a list for my study because I'm a student and I need to know what things I must do in my routine or other schedules.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary fillers like 'uh' and 'because' repeated. 'What's what thing I can, I must do' is confusing and should be 'what things I must do'. The ending 'in my.' is incomplete and should be 'in my routine or other schedules'. The correction improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Because some people they are not discipline and maybe they scare the fellow or they postpones, postpones the making a decision to do lots of thing. So they don't do the list making list.

✓ Because some people are not disciplined and maybe they are afraid of failure or they postpone making decisions to do many things. So they don't make lists.

'Some people they' is redundant; 'some people' suffices. 'Not discipline' should be 'not disciplined' (adjective). 'Scare the fellow' is incorrect; likely intended 'afraid of failure'. 'Postpones' should be 'postpone' to agree with plural subject. 'Making a decision to do lots of thing' should be 'making decisions to do many things'. 'They don't do the list making list' is awkward; corrected to 'they don't make lists'.

× Because some people they are not discipline and maybe they scare the fellow or they postpones, postpones the making a decision to do lots of thing. So they don't do the list making list.

✓ Because some people are not disciplined and maybe they are afraid of failure or they postpone making decisions to do many things. So they don't make lists.

'Lots of thing' should be 'many things' to correctly use plural form. 'List making list' is incorrect; 'make lists' is the correct plural form.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because when you write you remember this longer when longer would then when you make a list on your phone, and because when you wash your my your phones, you can neglect.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when you write, you remember it longer than when you make a list on your phone, and because when you wash your phone, you can lose it.

The sentence has pronoun confusion: 'this' should be 'it' referring to the list. 'When longer would then' is incorrect and should be 'longer than'. 'Wash your my your phones' is incorrect; likely meant 'wash your phone'. 'You can neglect' is vague; 'you can lose it' is clearer. The corrections clarify pronoun use and sentence meaning.