List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and structuring your sentences clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list. For example, last weekend I prepared a list of 25 items to buy, which helped me remember everything and shop efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words and more precise vocabulary to make your answer clearer and more effective.

Example: Yes, I prefer making a to-do list for work because it helps me remember my tasks and organize them properly during working hours.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Focus on making your sentences clear and coherent by using correct grammar and linking words.

Example: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it takes too much time and effort. Additionally, they feel it limits their personal freedom and creativity.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and correct grammar to make your answer more natural and clear.

Example: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is more accessible and easier than paper. Also, I can set alarms to remind me when needed.

× Recently I made a 25 number of goods that I should shop during my weekends.

✓ Recently I made a list of 25 items that I should buy during my weekends.

The phrase 'a 25 number of goods' is incorrect. Instead, use 'a list of 25 items' to correctly quantify and describe the goods. Also, 'shop' should be replaced with 'buy' to fit the context.

× He tells me to memorize the things to buy and it helps me to.

✓ It tells me to memorize the things to buy and it helps me too.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrect here because there is no male subject previously mentioned. 'It' refers to the list. Also, 'helps me to' is incomplete; it should be 'helps me too' to indicate agreement.

× I made a 25 number of goods that I should shop during my weekends.

✓ I made a list of 25 items that I should buy during my weekends.

Repeating the correction for clarity: 'a 25 number of goods' is not a correct quantifier. Use 'a list of 25 items' instead.

× I I prefer to make a list for work and To Do List.

✓ I prefer to make a list for work and a To-Do List.

The repetition 'I I' is a typographical error. Also, 'To Do List' should be hyphenated as 'To-Do List' and preceded by an article 'a'.

× It helps me memorize the things to do during my working hour and it also helps me organize all the thing appropriately.

✓ It helps me memorize the things to do during my working hours and it also helps me organize all the things appropriately.

'Working hour' should be plural 'working hours' to indicate the time period. 'All the thing' should be 'all the things' to match plural form.

× In my opinion, many peoples that it takes too much time and efforts to do to make a list and in addition on and some people also thinks that it hinders personal freedom and lack and creativity.

✓ In my opinion, many people think that it takes too much time and effort to make a list, and in addition, some people also think that it hinders personal freedom and creativity.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. 'Efforts' should be singular 'effort' when used in this context. 'Thinks' should be 'think' to agree with plural subject 'people'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× In addition on and some people also thinks that it hinders personal freedom and lack and creativity.

✓ In addition, some people also think that it hinders personal freedom and creativity.

The phrase 'in addition on and' is incorrect. It should be 'in addition,' to connect ideas properly. Also, 'lack and creativity' is unclear and should be simplified to 'creativity'.

× I prefer to make a list in a mobile phone as it is more accessible and easy to make a list then in a paper and it also helps me to remind by making a alarm whenever I need it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as it is more accessible and easier to make a list than on paper, and it also helps me by setting an alarm whenever I need it.

Use 'on' instead of 'in' for devices like mobile phones. 'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. 'In a paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Helps me to remind by making a alarm' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me by setting an alarm'.