List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'from my perspective' and unnecessary repetition. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy. For example, I use apps on my phone to note down items, which is very convenient. This way, I avoid forgetting important things and save time while shopping.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain why making lists was helpful, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating words like 'important' and ensure grammatical accuracy for better clarity.

Example: Yes, I used to make lists at work, especially during night shifts because I was the only staff on duty. Therefore, I wrote down important handovers to ensure I didn't forget any tasks and completed them on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid vague expressions like 'my take on this'. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons and correct grammar to improve understanding.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming. They prefer to rely on their memory, believing they have a sharp mind. However, this sometimes leads to forgetting important tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer has good points but is a bit repetitive and slightly off-topic regarding pollution. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases and keep sentences concise.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and less likely to get lost compared to paper. Additionally, there are apps that help me organize my notes and remind me of important tasks.

× From my perspective, not only me, most of the people usually like to make a list because they're around different types of people who are old age, who are younger and, and there are certain apps to write down the notes, which helps us to remember.

✓ From my perspective, not only I, but most people usually like to make a list because they are around different types of people who are old and who are younger, and there are certain apps to write down notes, which help us to remember.

The phrase 'not only me' is incorrect; the subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead of the object pronoun 'me' after 'not only'. Also, 'most of the people' is better as 'most people' for natural usage. 'Who are old age' is incorrect; it should be 'who are old'. The verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'apps'. These corrections improve pronoun usage and subject-verb agreement.

× When I was working in the hotel, I do like to make a list when I was specially when I was doing a night shift because I was the only person through the whole operation.

✓ When I was working in the hotel, I liked to make a list, especially when I was doing a night shift because I was the only person throughout the whole operation.

The phrase 'I do like' is present tense and does not fit the past context; it should be 'I liked'. 'Specially' is incorrect; the correct word is 'especially'. 'Through the whole operation' should be 'throughout the whole operation' to correctly express the meaning. These changes correct tense and word choice errors.

× So I do like to write down those important, important handovers to not to forget and do it in proper time.

✓ So I liked to write down those important handovers so as not to forget and to do them in proper time.

The phrase 'to not to forget' is incorrect; it should be 'so as not to forget'. Also, 'do it in proper time' is vague; 'do them in proper time' is clearer and agrees with the plural 'handovers'. These corrections fix preposition and pronoun reference errors.

× My take on this is the people find it very inconvenient and maybe very time consuming and those people want to rely on their own brand.

✓ My take on this is that people find it very inconvenient and maybe very time-consuming, and those people want to rely on their own brain.

The phrase 'the people' is better as 'people' without 'the' for general statements. 'Brand' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'brain'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. These corrections improve pronoun and word choice.

× Maybe they think like they are very they have a very sharp brain and and they feel like more confident and but forgetting the things.

✓ Maybe they think they have a very sharp brain and feel more confident but tend to forget things.

The phrase 'think like they are very they have' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'think they have'. The repeated 'and and' is an error. 'Feel like more confident and but forgetting the things' is ungrammatical; it should be 'feel more confident but tend to forget things'. These corrections fix conjunction and sentence structure errors.

× So that's why I think they don't like to write down.

✓ So that's why I think they don't like to write things down.

The phrase 'write down' is a phrasal verb that requires an object; 'things' is needed to complete the meaning. This correction fixes the pronoun omission.

× To be honest, the pollution is increasing already a lot, so rather write down in my mobile phone instead of writing on a paper because it might get lost.

✓ To be honest, pollution is already increasing a lot, so I prefer to write things down on my mobile phone instead of on paper because the list might get lost.

The phrase 'write down in my mobile phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for devices. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' without an article. Also, the sentence lacked a subject for 'rather write down'; adding 'I prefer to' clarifies the meaning. These corrections fix preposition and sentence structure errors.

× So I want to more rely on my mobile phone and write it down in my mobile phone.

✓ So I want to rely more on my mobile phone and write things down on it.

The phrase 'want to more rely' is incorrect; the adverb 'more' should come after the verb 'rely'. 'Write it down in my mobile phone' is incorrect; the preposition 'on' is used with devices, and 'things' is needed as the object. These corrections fix adverb placement and pronoun usage.

× And apart from this, there are certain apps to write down the notes, important notes and not forget about it and it's also in order.

✓ Apart from this, there are certain apps to write down important notes so as not to forget them, and they also keep things in order.

The phrase 'not forget about it' is incorrect; it should be 'so as not to forget them' to refer to 'notes'. 'It's also in order' is unclear; 'they also keep things in order' clarifies the meaning. These corrections fix preposition and pronoun reference errors.