Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
No, I don't.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes. It's a problem I think. This is good job.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Because they think troublesome.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
On my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和理由。建议在回答时直接表达观点,并补充原因或相关细节,使回答更自然且内容丰富。
Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 回答不够清晰,表达混乱,缺乏逻辑和具体内容。建议先明确回答问题,然后用连贯的句子解释原因或效果。
Example: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答简短且语法不完整。建议使用完整句子,并详细说明原因,增加内容的丰富性和连贯性。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming to write everything down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答简洁但缺乏细节。建议在回答时说明原因,并用连接词丰富句子,使表达更自然流畅。
Example: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit it whenever I need to.
× Yes. It's a problem I think.
✓ Yes. I think it's a problem.
句子中“It's a problem I think”语序不正确,应该将“我认为”放在句首或句尾,使句子更符合英语表达习惯。建议将句子改为“I think it's a problem”。
× This is good job.
✓ This is a good job.
“job”是可数名词,前面需要冠词“a”。缺少冠词导致表达不完整。建议在“good job”前加上冠词“a”。
× Because they think troublesome.
✓ Because they think it is troublesome.
句子缺少主语和系动词,导致结构不完整。应补充“it is”使句子完整。建议改为“Because they think it is troublesome”。