List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on using correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I need and prevents me from making impulse purchases.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your sentences better and use linking words to explain how making a list helps you. Avoid incomplete sentences and be more specific.

Example: I often get distracted easily, so making a list of tasks helps me stay focused and track my progress throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and unclear expressions. Try to explain your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid contradictory phrases like 'may might'.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their work routine and creativity. Additionally, failing to complete the list might make them feel disappointed.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains errors like 'make English on my phone'. Try to complete your sentences and avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to compare your preferences clearly.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere. In contrast, paper lists are less convenient to carry and check.

× Making a list helps me remember to things I need to buy and also it helps me not to buy things randomly and making wrong bad decisions.

✓ Making a list helps me remember the things I need to buy and also helps me not to buy things randomly and make wrong bad decisions.

The phrase 'to things' is incorrect; it should be 'the things' to specify the items. Also, 'making wrong bad decisions' should be 'make wrong bad decisions' to maintain parallel verb forms after 'helps me not to buy things randomly and...'. This correction ensures proper singular/plural usage and verb form consistency.

× I usually get distracted pretty much easily, so making a list the work I need to do help me achieve my goal faster and also keep the track what I have done the entire day.

✓ I usually get distracted quite easily, so making a list of the work I need to do helps me achieve my goals faster and also keep track of what I have done throughout the day.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'of' after 'making a list', and 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. Also, 'keep the track what I have done' is incorrect; it should be 'keep track of what I have done'. These corrections fix preposition use, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure.

× Making list can limit a person's work work routine in a certain manner.

✓ Making a list can limit a person's work routine in a certain manner.

The phrase 'Making list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'work work routine' seems to be a repetition error; it should be 'work routine'. This correction addresses article usage and removes redundancy.

× It can also hamper one's creativity and if one can achieve the listed work, they may might feel depressed.

✓ It can also hamper one's creativity, and if one achieves the listed work, they might feel depressed.

The phrase 'may might' is incorrect; only one modal verb should be used. Also, 'if one can achieve' is better expressed as 'if one achieves' for clarity. The correction removes redundant modal verbs and improves verb tense consistency.

× I prefer to make English on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone.

The phrase 'make English' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'make lists'. This correction replaces the incorrect phrase with the appropriate noun to convey the intended meaning.