List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ như "to avoid buying unnecessary things" thay vì "it is a way by an unnecessary thing". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Example: Yes, I often make a list before going shopping for several reasons. Firstly, it helps me save time while shopping. Secondly, it allows me to avoid buying unnecessary things.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ thừa như "uh" và câu trả lời cần được hoàn chỉnh hơn. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng về cách bạn sử dụng danh sách công việc và hiệu quả của nó. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I use a bullet journal notebook to write down my tasks at the beginning of each day. I usually spend about five minutes listing everything I need to do, and this method helps me stay organized and focused.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng một cách logic, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về thói quen, kỹ năng quản lý thời gian và sức khỏe tinh thần như lý do không thích làm danh sách.

Example: I think some people don't like making lists for several reasons. Firstly, it might not be their habit. Secondly, they may lack time management skills. Lastly, they might feel that making lists affects their mental well-being.

Suggestion: Bạn cần diễn đạt câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói bạn thích viết trên giấy vì cảm giác vật lý khi viết giúp bạn nhớ tốt hơn.

Example: Actually, I use two ways to make lists, but I prefer writing them down on paper because the physical act of writing helps me remember better.

× Firstly for saving time when I'm shopping and 2nd it is a way by an unnecessary thing.

✓ Firstly, for saving time when I'm shopping, and secondly, it is a way to avoid unnecessary things.

The phrase 'a way by an unnecessary thing' is incorrect. The correct preposition to express purpose is 'to' as in 'a way to avoid unnecessary things'. Also, '2nd' should be written as 'secondly' for formal speech.

× Uh, yes, I have a bullet journal notebook, uh, to write in the beginning of the day, uh, to do this, but I usually call it, uh, so I usually spend 5 minutes, uh, to work down all the things that I need to do in that day. It's.

✓ Uh, yes, I have a bullet journal notebook where I write at the beginning of the day what I need to do. I usually spend 5 minutes writing down all the things I need to do that day.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'To work down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'writing down'. Also, 'in the beginning of the day' should be 'at the beginning of the day'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× I usually spend 5 minutes, uh, to work down all the things that I need to do in that day.

✓ I usually spend 5 minutes writing down all the things that I need to do that day.

The verb 'spend' should be followed by a gerund ('writing down'), not an infinitive ('to work down'). Also, 'in that day' should be 'that day' for correct time expression.

× Uh, I think for several reasons that people, some people don't like making mistakes, uh, because, uh, first of all, it is habit.

✓ Uh, I think for several reasons, some people don't like making lists because, first of all, it is not a habit for them.

The original sentence incorrectly says 'making mistakes' instead of 'making lists', which is the intended meaning. Also, 'it is habit' is incomplete; it should be 'it is not a habit for them' to clarify the meaning.

× They don't have the time management skill.

✓ They don't have time management skills.

'Skill' should be plural 'skills' because time management usually involves multiple skills. Also, 'the' is unnecessary before 'time management skills'.

× And the second, I think that they can organizing in their health.

✓ And secondly, I think that they can organize their health.

'Can organizing' is incorrect; it should be 'can organize' (modal verb + base verb). Also, 'in their health' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'organize their health' or 'manage their health'.

× Actually IIU two ways to making this to be on it.

✓ Actually, I have two ways to make this happen.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors: 'IIU' is likely a typo for 'I have'; 'to making' should be 'to make'; 'to be on it' is unclear and unnecessary. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I prefer writing them down paper because of the filming of writing this make me more more physically.

✓ I prefer writing them down on paper because the feeling of writing makes me feel more connected physically.

'Writing them down paper' lacks the preposition 'on'. 'Filming' is a typo for 'feeling'. The phrase 'make me more more physically' is unclear and corrected to 'makes me feel more connected physically' for clarity.