List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh dùng từ lóng như "gonna" trong bài thi IELTS. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market because it helps me buy things faster and not forget anything.

Suggestion: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Từ "megaliths" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work because it is creative. If I don't, I might forget important tasks. Therefore, I list what needs to be done and what can be postponed.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là cách dùng động từ và danh từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility and creativity when working.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can check my list anytime, unlike paper which is inconvenient to carry.

× When I go to shopping, I usually make a list of what I'm gonna be buy.

✓ When I go shopping, I usually make a list of what I'm gonna buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed directly by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'gonna be buy' is incorrect; it should be 'gonna buy' because 'gonna' (going to) is followed by the base form of the verb.

× I enjoy megaliths for my work because my work is creative work.

✓ I enjoy making lists for my work because my work is creative work.

The word 'megaliths' is incorrect and seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'making lists'. The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), so 'making lists' is correct.

× I think some people dislike make a list because they feel that making lists can limit their flexibility when doing tax.

✓ I think some people dislike making a list because they feel that making lists can limit their flexibility when doing tasks.

After 'dislike', the verb should be in the gerund form 'making'. Also, 'doing tax' is incorrect; it should be 'doing tasks' or 'doing work'.

× So they they do not making a list because they want to do their work more creative.

✓ So they do not make a list because they want to do their work more creatively.

The phrase 'do not making' is incorrect; it should be 'do not make' because 'do' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'more creative' should be 'more creatively' to correctly modify the verb 'do'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere with me, so I can't open it up and read the list everywhere and every time I need instead of paper because I cannot bring paper every time with me, I can.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere with me, so I can open it up and read the list everywhere and every time I need it, instead of paper because I cannot bring paper with me every time.

The phrase 'I can't open it up' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I can open it up' to express ability. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and redundant; 'every time I need' should be 'every time I need it'. The phrase 'I cannot bring paper every time with me, I can' is contradictory and should be corrected to 'I cannot bring paper with me every time'.