Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
I don't have this kind of habit when I was shopping either online or offline. You know, maybe I will have this kind of lease on my mind. I but I will not write down.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Well, I do have this kind of habit for my work, you know, because it is a very powerful tool for me to prioritize all of my tasks. And so I will make A to do list on a weekly or the daily basis. Yeah, it is quite helpful for me to organize everything and to just follow the schedule. Yeah.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
So I think the first reason is the thing we not follow happen just we expect. So maybe for them just wasting the time and not have any another meaning for making A to do list. And another reason I think maybe is they will feel stressful when they see a lot of task.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Well, personally I will prefer making these on my phone because, uh, it is super convenient for me because uh, you know, the app will remind me on time and can easily to prioritize all of my tasks. So yes, it is quite, umm, effective way for me to make it A to do list on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不够自然,语法和表达存在错误,且内容重复。建议简化表达,直接回答问题,并用简单句子说明原因。
Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to remember what I need instead of writing it down.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较完整,但有些语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. I create daily or weekly lists, which make it easier to stay organized and follow my schedule.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 表达不够清晰,语法错误较多。建议用更简单的句子表达观点,注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it's a waste of time if they don't follow it. Also, seeing many tasks on a list can make them feel stressed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答内容完整,但有口语填充词较多,语法有小错误。建议减少口语填充词,注意语法准确,表达更简洁。
Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. The apps remind me on time and help me prioritize my tasks effectively.
× I don't have this kind of habit when I was shopping either online or offline.
✓ I didn't have this kind of habit when I shopped either online or offline.
这里描述的是过去的习惯,应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态'don't have',与时间状语'when I was shopping'不一致,应该改为过去时'didn't have',并且动词'shopping'改为过去式'shopped'。
× maybe I will have this kind of lease on my mind. I but I will not write down.
✓ maybe I will have this kind of idea on my mind, but I will not write it down.
原句中'lease'用词错误,应为'idea'或类似表达;'I but I will not write down'结构混乱,缺少宾语,应该改为'but I will not write it down'。
× And so I will make A to do list on a weekly or the daily basis.
✓ And so I will make a to-do list on a weekly or daily basis.
'A to do list'中'to do list'应连字符连接为'to-do list',且'weekly or the daily basis'中'the'不应出现,且'daily'前不加冠词。
× So I think the first reason is the thing we not follow happen just we expect.
✓ So I think the first reason is that things don't happen just as we expect.
原句中'singluar and plural'使用错误,'the thing'应为复数'things',且句子结构不完整,缺少连词'that',动词形式也需调整。
× And another reason I think maybe is they will feel stressful when they see a lot of task.
✓ And another reason, I think, may be that they feel stressed when they see a lot of tasks.
'feel stressful'用法错误,应为'feel stressed'表示感到压力;'a lot of task'中'task'应为复数'tasks'。
× the app will remind me on time and can easily to prioritize all of my tasks.
✓ the app will remind me on time and can easily prioritize all of my tasks.
'can easily to prioritize'中不应有'to',情态动词后直接接动词原形。