List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'as' twice, you can use 'because' or 'since' once and then add a linking phrase.

Example: Yes, I definitely make a list when I shop because it helps me shop more effectively and saves time. Additionally, it reduces the chances of buying unnecessary items.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same reason twice. Also, be careful with sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I make a list of my work because it helps me stay organised and track my daily goals. Therefore, it works well for me since I am not good at remembering tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases like 'as if California'. Try to be more specific and coherent. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to explain reasons clearly. Avoid vague or unrelated expressions.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember their tasks easily. For example, they may find lists unnecessary or even demotivating.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to use linking words like 'so' and 'for example' effectively and avoid unnecessary details. Also, check for small grammar mistakes like 'all my task' should be 'all my tasks'.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because it is convenient and portable. For example, I write my tasks on a paper and stick it near my bed so I can easily check my deadlines.

× Moreover, it also decreases the chances of buying something that is useless and not of my need.

✓ Moreover, it also decreases the chances of buying something that is useless and not needed by me.

The phrase 'not of my need' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'not needed by me' or 'not necessary for me'. This is an issue with quantifier and expression usage, where the original phrase does not convey the intended meaning clearly.

× For sure I make a list of my work as it helps me stay organised and check whether if I have completed my day goals.

✓ For sure, I make a list of my work as it helps me stay organised and check whether I have completed my day goals.

The phrase 'whether if' is incorrect because 'whether' alone is sufficient to introduce alternatives or possibilities. Using both 'whether' and 'if' together is redundant and grammatically incorrect.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they think that they are of no use as they can easily remember all their task and what plan to prioritize and they can.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they think that they are of no use as they can easily remember all their tasks and what plans to prioritize.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'all their', and 'plan' should be plural 'plans' to agree with the context. This is a quantifier and singular/plural issue.

× Moreover, there can be their specific reasons as if California as it can be demotivating.

✓ Moreover, there can be specific reasons, such as stress or pressure, as making lists can be demotivating.

The original sentence is unclear and contains an irrelevant phrase 'as if California'. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs rephrasing to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer to make a list on the paper as it is more convenient and I can easily carry it wherever I want.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper as it is more convenient and I can easily carry it wherever I want.

The article 'the' before 'paper' is unnecessary here because 'paper' is used in a general sense. Removing 'the' is correct usage in this context.

× For instance, I usually write all my task on a piece of paper and paste it in front of my bed so as whenever I get up and roam in my room, I usually have a look on them and see my deadline.

✓ For instance, I usually write all my tasks on a piece of paper and paste it in front of my bed so that whenever I get up and roam in my room, I usually have a look at them and see my deadlines.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'all my'. Also, 'have a look on them' should be 'have a look at them'. 'See my deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' to match the context. These are singular/plural and preposition usage errors.