List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer ta besh boro, kintu kichu part redundant. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke clear, shothik grammar diye korte, ar linking words use korun jate answer ta natural lage.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember all the necessary items. This way, I can shop faster and avoid forgetting anything important.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure error ache, ar kichu part clear na. Apni chesta korun prothome direct uttor din, tarpor linking words diye supporting details add korun. Ekhane kichu word choice o improve kora dorkar.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list before starting any work because it helps me decide where to begin and which tasks are most important. This improves my performance and ensures better results.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e grammar ar clarity improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korte, ar linking words use kore uttor ke logical banate. Specific example dile aro bhalo hobe.

Example: Some people may dislike making lists because they lack organizational skills. As a result, they might do tasks in a random order, which makes it difficult to complete their work efficiently.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar sentence structure error ache. Apni chesta korun uttor ke shothik grammar diye, ar linking words use kore clear korte. Apnar preference ke bistarito vabe bolte paren.

Example: I like both methods. For a few items, I prefer to use my phone's notepad app because it's convenient. However, when I have a long shopping list, I prefer to write it on paper because it's easier to manage.

× Absolutely, I make a list before I go to a shop for buying because if I list items then I cannot forget which what's my necessary.

✓ Absolutely, I make a list before I go to a shop to buy because if I list items then I cannot forget what is necessary for me.

The phrase 'for buying' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'to buy' as it expresses purpose. Also, 'which what's my necessary' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'what is necessary for me' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× So I think make a list it's better to faster shopping and also it's very.

✓ So I think making a list is better for faster shopping and also it is very helpful.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. 'Make a list it's better to faster shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list is better for faster shopping'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and also it's very' which is incomplete; adding 'helpful' completes the thought.

× Before start any types of work I make a list because then I find where I can start and which works.

✓ Before starting any type of work, I make a list because then I find where I can start and which work to do.

The phrase 'Before start' is incorrect; it should be 'Before starting' using the present participle form after 'before'. Also, 'any types of work' should be 'any type of work' for singular consistency. 'Which works' should be 'which work to do' for clarity.

× I need to do for the better performance and output.

✓ I need to do for better performance and output.

The use of 'the' before 'better performance' is unnecessary here; 'better performance' is a general concept and does not require the definite article. Also, the sentence is incomplete without context but correcting the article improves grammar.

× So eventually I make list before work and I always I show that.

✓ So eventually, I make a list before work and I always follow it.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. 'I always I show that' is incorrect; it should be 'I always follow it' to express the intended meaning of adhering to the list.

× Maybe some people do not like to make list because they I think they and they have no organized skill organizing skills, so they try to do last works at first, middle work at last, so they cannot do clearly.

✓ Maybe some people do not like to make lists because I think they have no organizing skills, so they try to do last works first and middle work last, so they cannot do it clearly.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced pronouns 'they I think they'. It should be 'I think they'. Also, 'organized skill organizing skills' is repetitive; 'organizing skills' suffices. 'Do last works at first' should be 'do last works first'. 'Cannot do clearly' should be 'cannot do it clearly' for clarity.

× Maybe some people do not like to make list because they I think they and they have no organized skill organizing skills, so they try to do last works at first, middle work at last, so they cannot do clearly.

✓ Maybe some people do not like to make lists because I think they have no organizing skills, so they try to do last works first and middle work last, so they cannot do it clearly.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general action of making lists. Also, 'work' should be consistent in number; 'last works' and 'middle work' are inconsistent; better to say 'last tasks' and 'middle tasks' or keep consistent.

× I like both because when I go to for a few items to buy in market and then I prefer to phone for making list I use notepad and also when I have to do large list to buy then I choose paper list.

✓ I like both because when I go to buy a few items in the market, I prefer to use my phone to make a list using notepad, and also when I have to make a large list to buy, I choose a paper list.

The phrase 'go to for a few items' is incorrect; it should be 'go to buy a few items'. 'In market' should be 'in the market' with the definite article. 'Prefer to phone for making list' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to use my phone to make a list'. 'Large list to buy' should be 'large list to buy' or better 'large shopping list'. 'Paper list' should be 'a paper list'.