Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, of course. I often write a list in my mobile phone memo when I shop. I think it is a convenient way so that it helps me avoid forgetting some necessary things.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Definitely. I would say I make A to do list almost every day when I'm working. Especially the tasks are so complex. I think it plays a important role because it helps me to put my ducks in a row.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Making lists. There are several reasons for them. Firstly, sometimes the planning can't keep pace with the changes so the list might be ineffective, and also you should spend too much time in making this, so some people might think it's a hassle.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think I might forget to bring my paper, but I usually catch my phone with me so it's accessible and convenient way for me.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 你的回答比较自然且内容相关,但可以更简洁,避免重复表达“方便”和“避免忘记”的意思。建议用更丰富的词汇表达便利性,并且用连接词使句子更流畅。
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because it’s very convenient and ensures I don’t forget essential items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误(如冠词使用错误),表达不够连贯。建议注意冠词使用,使用连接词使句子更流畅,并用更正式的表达替代口语化短语。
Example: Definitely. I make a to-do list almost every day, especially when tasks are complex, because it helps me organize my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答开头不够自然,句子结构有些断裂。建议直接回答问题,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并且用更准确的表达说明原因。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because plans can quickly become outdated, making the list ineffective. Moreover, creating lists can be time-consuming, which some find troublesome.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误(如冠词缺失),表达稍显重复。建议注意冠词使用,避免重复表达“方便”,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, unlike paper, which I might forget. This makes it a more accessible and convenient option.
× I would say I make A to do list almost every day when I'm working.
✓ I would say I make a to-do list almost every day when I'm working.
这里的“a”应该是小写,且“to do list”应写作“to-do list”,因为这是固定短语。冠词使用错误属于定冠词使用错误。建议记住固定短语的正确写法。
× I think it plays a important role because it helps me to put my ducks in a row.
✓ I think it plays an important role because it helps me to put my ducks in a row.
“important”以元音音素开头,前面的不定冠词应使用“an”而不是“a”。这是定冠词使用错误。建议根据单词发音选择正确的冠词。
× sometimes the planning can't keep pace with the changes so the list might be ineffective, and also you should spend too much time in making this, so some people might think it's a hassle.
✓ sometimes the planning can't keep pace with the changes so the list might be ineffective, and also you should spend too much time making this, so some people might think it's a hassle.
“spend time”后面直接接动名词,不需要介词“in”。这是介词使用错误。建议记住“spend time doing something”的固定搭配。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think I might forget to bring my paper, but I usually catch my phone with me so it's accessible and convenient way for me.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think I might forget to bring my paper, but I usually carry my phone with me so it's an accessible and convenient way for me.
“catch my phone with me”不合适,正确表达应为“carry my phone with me”。此外,“accessible and convenient way”前应加不定冠词“an”。这是代词和冠词使用错误。建议学习常用动词搭配和冠词用法。