List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and organized with linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items when I go to the store. Moreover, making a list helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary things, which saves money.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrasing. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repetition and check for sentence completeness.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks assigned to me. I create a checklist and tick off each task when I complete it, which helps me stay organized and on track.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, which is good. However, there are some grammatical errors and awkward expressions. Try to use correct verb forms and improve sentence flow with linking words for better coherence.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and can feel tedious. For instance, my sister works at a busy beauty salon and prefers to keep her day flexible rather than planning everything in advance. This allows her to focus on her work without being restricted by a strict schedule.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a complete example to support your preference and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and saves time compared to paper lists. For example, when I browse social media, I can quickly add tasks to my phone list, which helps me remember what I need to do.

× Yes I do make a list when I saw because I tend to forget the things that I need when I actually go to the shop and it is more convenient and time saving for me.

✓ Yes I do make a list when I shop because I tend to forget the things that I need when I actually go to the shop and it is more convenient and time saving for me.

The verb 'saw' is past tense and does not fit the present tense context of the sentence. The correct verb should be 'shop' to match the present tense used in the question and the rest of the sentence.

× Also I always sort out everything that I need and that I don't so I don't have to spend extra money or unnecessary money on the things that I don't want or need.

✓ Also I always sort out everything that I need and that I don't need so I don't have to spend extra or unnecessary money on the things that I don't want or need.

The phrase 'that I don't' is incomplete and should be 'that I don't need' to clarify the meaning. Also, 'extra money or unnecessary money' is redundant; 'extra or unnecessary money' is more concise and correct.

× Yes I do make a list for my work and yes it does work because it office I have a lot of work to do and I was assigned with multiple tasks and for that I always make a checklist and whenever I complete the task I always tick on the side that helps me keep on track and keep keep the track of.

✓ Yes I do make a list for my work and yes it does work because at the office I have a lot of work to do and I was assigned multiple tasks and for that I always make a checklist and whenever I complete a task I always tick on the side; that helps me keep on track and keep track of my progress.

The phrase 'because it office' is incorrect; it should be 'because at the office' to indicate location. Also, 'assigned with multiple tasks' should be 'assigned multiple tasks' as 'assign' does not require 'with'. The phrase 'keep keep the track of' is redundant and should be 'keep track of'.

× Some people don't like making lists because it takes proportional time and also they find it a bit tedious.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it takes a proportional amount of time and also they find it a bit tedious.

The phrase 'takes proportional time' is missing an article and a quantifier. It should be 'takes a proportional amount of time' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× For example, my sister work at a beauty salon and she is usually very busy, so she prefer to keep her day flexible instead of planning everything in advance.

✓ For example, my sister works at a beauty salon and she is usually very busy, so she prefers to keep her day flexible instead of planning everything in advance.

The verbs 'work' and 'prefer' need to agree with the third person singular subject 'my sister'. They should be 'works' and 'prefers' respectively.

× This way she can focus on her work without worrying about this sticking to a strict schedule.

✓ This way she can focus on her work without worrying about sticking to a strict schedule.

The phrase 'worrying about this sticking' is incorrect; 'this' is unnecessary and should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it feels convenient for me to use phone rather than rather than just checking out the paper and just going through everything.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it feels more convenient for me to use my phone rather than just checking the paper and going through everything.

The phrase 'use phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my'. Also, 'checking out the paper' is better as 'checking the paper' for clarity and correctness. The repeated phrase 'rather than rather than' is a redundancy and should be corrected to a single 'rather than'.