List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and use simple, correct sentences. Avoid repetition and ensure your answer is coherent and concise.

Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping. However, I have realized that making a list before going can help me control my spending and remember what I need to buy.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your response logical and easy to follow.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list for my daily tasks, including work and personal activities. Although I try to follow it strictly, sometimes it is difficult to complete everything as planned.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to express your ideas clearly and use specific reasons with linking words to support your opinion.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and feel that they cannot follow them properly. Also, many people are lazy to complete the tasks on their lists.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to give a clear reason with a simple explanation and avoid unnecessary repetition to make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my list anytime and anywhere.

× Actually, I don't make any list when I was in the shop, but when I back to my house, I really I really thought that was one of the one of the best purpose to do before before went to the shop.

✓ Actually, I don't make any list when I am in the shop, but when I get back to my house, I really thought that was one of the best purposes to do before going to the shop.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'I was in the shop' should be 'I am in the shop' to match the habitual action. 'When I back to my house' is missing a verb; it should be 'when I get back to my house'. 'Before went to the shop' should be 'before going to the shop' to use the gerund form after 'before'. These corrections ensure proper tense consistency and verb forms.

× Actually the list helped to control.

✓ Actually, the list helps to control.

The sentence lacks clarity and proper verb tense. 'Helped' is past tense, but the context suggests a general truth, so present tense 'helps' is better. Also, 'to control' is vague; it would be better to specify what is controlled, but as per instruction, only grammar issues are corrected.

× I usually make a list to do, to go for a walk, to do something. Actually, I plan. I actually I plan. I plan every day, every day in my life and every minute in my life. But unfortunately, that was the that was the impossible that was.

✓ I usually make a list to do things, to go for a walk, to do something. Actually, I plan. I actually plan every day, every day in my life and every minute in my life. But unfortunately, that is impossible.

The phrase 'that was the impossible' is incorrect; 'that is impossible' fits better as it refers to a general truth. Also, 'I actually I plan' is redundant; corrected to 'I actually plan'. The rest is kept as is to maintain meaning.

× Uh, I think they often bored about making the list.

✓ Uh, I think they are often bored with making the list.

The phrase 'bored about' is incorrect; the correct preposition with 'bored' is 'with'. Also, 'they often bored' lacks the verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense 'are often bored'.

× It is because they are not able to follow those lists.

✓ It is because they are not able to follow those lists.

This sentence is correct in pronoun usage; no correction needed.

× Oh, yes, all of all of all of us, all of us are lazy to do lazy to do the notable things.

✓ Oh, yes, all of us are lazy to do the notable things.

The phrase 'all of all of all of us' is repetitive and incorrect. Simplified to 'all of us'. Also, 'lazy to do lazy to do' is repetitive; corrected to 'lazy to do'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I actually, I, I think yeah.

✓ Yes, I actually think so.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Simplified to 'Yes, I actually think so.' for clarity and correctness.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It it is because we, we, we carry our phone like a baby, baby in a mother hand.

✓ It is because we carry our phone like a baby in a mother's hand.

Removed repeated words 'it it' and 'we, we, we'. Corrected 'a mother hand' to 'a mother's hand' to show possession. These changes improve sentence fluency and grammatical correctness.

× So one of the best one one of the best idea to make a list in a phone that was that that is very.

✓ So one of the best ideas is to make a list on the phone; that is very convenient.

Corrected 'one one of the best idea' to 'one of the best ideas' for singular/plural agreement. Changed 'in a phone' to 'on the phone' as the correct preposition for devices. Completed the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.