Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I reckon making a lease before shopping as a good habits because I usually forget things. Making a list can help me remember them before departure. I make a list about what to buy on my phone in the app and after picking each of the things I delete each items.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Definitely. I believe my life should be in order. So I make plans in at least before the day started, usually at night. I note what I need to do in the notebooks for the reference of tomorrow.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Some individual likes more flexible lives, so they don't want us stuck in the plants and the structure they made, so they prefer to do the things impromptu and refuse to make some list.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I used to make the schedule on paper, but now phones are more portable. So recently I downloaded some applications and made my schedule there. I can check them as soon as I want.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“lease”应为“list”,“good habits”应为复数形式。此外,句子结构较为简单,缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意单词拼写和语法,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: Yes, I think making a list before shopping is a good habit because I often forget things. Therefore, I usually create a shopping list on an app on my phone, and I delete each item after buying it to keep track.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答内容较为清晰,但存在语法错误,如“in at least before the day started”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的时间表达,并增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: Definitely. I believe my life should be organized, so I usually make plans the night before. I write down what I need to do in a notebook as a reference for the next day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“individual”应为复数形式,“plants”应为“plans”。句子结构较为复杂但不够清晰,建议简化句子并使用正确词汇。
Example: Some people prefer a more flexible life, so they don't want to be stuck in plans or strict schedules. Therefore, they like to do things spontaneously and avoid making lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然且内容完整,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议在句子间加入连接词,丰富表达。
Example: I used to make schedules on paper, but now phones are more portable. Therefore, I recently downloaded some applications and make my schedule there, so I can check it whenever I want.
× I reckon making a lease before shopping as a good habits because I usually forget things.
✓ I reckon making a list before shopping is a good habit because I usually forget things.
habits是复数形式,但这里指的是一个习惯,应使用单数habit;lease应为list,拼写错误。
× Making a list can help me remember them before departure.
✓ Making a list can help me remember things before departure.
them指代不明确,改为things更合适。
× I make a list about what to buy on my phone in the app and after picking each of the things I delete each items.
✓ I make a list about what to buy on my phone in the app, and after picking each of the things, I delete each item.
items是复数,前面用each时应使用单数item。
× I make plans in at least before the day started, usually at night.
✓ I make plans at least before the day starts, usually at night.
in和at least不能连用,且时态应为一般现在时starts。
× I note what I need to do in the notebooks for the reference of tomorrow.
✓ I note what I need to do in the notebook for reference tomorrow.
notebooks复数不合适,通常用单数notebook;the reference前不需要冠词。
× Some individual likes more flexible lives, so they don't want us stuck in the plants and the structure they made, so they prefer to do the things impromptu and refuse to make some list.
✓ Some individuals like more flexible lives, so they don't want to be stuck in the plans and structures they made, so they prefer to do things impromptu and refuse to make lists.
individual应为复数individuals;like应与复数主语一致;plants应为plans;the structure改为structures;some list应为lists。
× I used to make the schedule on paper, but now phones are more portable.
✓ I used to make schedules on paper, but now phones are more portable.
schedule前应使用复数schedules,表示多次安排。
× So recently I downloaded some applications and made my schedule there.
✓ So recently I downloaded some applications and made my schedule there.
此句无明显语法错误,保持原句。
× I can check them as soon as I want.
✓ I can check them whenever I want.
as soon as用法不当,改为whenever更合适。