Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
No, I never make a list because I will buy something for my warning.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I will make a list for my work because it is very important. For example, I will make a list for my job in a day.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think it is difficult and sophisticated.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I like make a list on my phone because it is simple and. Confidence.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰,句子结构有误。建议用更自然的表达方式说明不做购物清单的原因,并避免语法错误。
Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答较为简单,缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议使用连接词丰富句子,并具体说明清单如何帮助工作。
Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, I write down all the tasks I need to complete each day to ensure nothing is forgotten.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答过于简短且用词不准确。建议详细说明原因,使用更合适的词汇,并举例说明。
Example: I think some people find making lists difficult because it requires extra effort and they may feel it is too complicated or time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达理由,使用正确的语法和词汇。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is simple and convenient, and I can easily edit or add items whenever I want.
× No, I never make a list because I will buy something for my warning.
✓ No, I never make a list because I buy something for my warning.
这里不需要使用将来时态“will”,因为描述的是习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时。
× Yes, I will make a list for my work because it is very important.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it is very important.
这里描述的是习惯性行为,应该使用一般现在时,而不是将来时“will”。
× For example, I will make a list for my job in a day.
✓ For example, I make a list for my job in a day.
同样,描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时,避免使用将来时“will”。
× I think it is difficult and sophisticated.
✓ I think it is difficult and complicated.
“sophisticated”通常指复杂且精密,语境中更合适用“complicated”表示“复杂难懂”。
× I like make a list on my phone because it is simple and. Confidence.
✓ I like to make a list on my phone because it is simple and convenient.
动词“like”后应接不定式“to make”或动名词“making”,且句子末尾“and. Confidence.”不完整,应改为“and convenient”表示“方便”。