Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
It depends on the situation. For example, if I need to buy necessary daily products, I will make a list before I go shopping, like buying food or tissues in the.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
I sometimes make a list for my work in order to organize my work and plan before I really start doing those mission. However, it does not work every time because it's hard to finish all.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think the reason why some people don't like making leaves is because the result may not be favorable. For example, due to different unexpected things happened, the least doesn't work on people cannot finish all.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
It depends on the situation. I usually make a list on a paper when I am at home, while I will use my phone to plan if I am outdoors since is more convenient for me to type and.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答时应避免句子不完整和语法错误,例如最后一句不完整。可以更自然地表达购物时是否列清单,并给出具体例子。
Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop, especially for essential items like food and toiletries, to make sure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议使用更准确的词汇(如tasks代替missions),并且说明为什么清单有时不奏效。
Example: Sometimes I make a list to organize my tasks before starting work, but it doesn't always help because unexpected things can come up and prevent me from finishing everything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有词汇错误(leaves应为lists),句子结构混乱。建议用更清晰的表达说明原因,并举具体例子。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because unexpected events can disrupt their plans, making the list ineffective and causing frustration.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答不完整且有语法错误。建议完整表达偏好并说明原因,使用连贯的句子。
Example: I prefer to make lists on paper when I'm at home because it's easier to write, but when I'm outside, I use my phone since it's more convenient to type and carry around.
× I will make a list before I go shopping, like buying food or tissues in the.
✓ I will make a list before I go shopping, like buying food or tissues.
句子末尾的介词“in the”没有明确的宾语,导致句子不完整且语法错误,应删除。
× I sometimes make a list for my work in order to organize my work and plan before I really start doing those mission.
✓ I sometimes make a list for my work in order to organize my work and plan before I really start doing those missions.
“mission”应使用复数形式“missions”,因为前面用了“those”指代多个任务。
× However, it does not work every time because it's hard to finish all.
✓ However, it does not work every time because it's hard to finish all of them.
“finish all”后缺少宾语,需补充“of them”指代前文提到的任务。
× I think the reason why some people don't like making leaves is because the result may not be favorable.
✓ I think the reason why some people don't like making lists is because the result may not be favorable.
“making leaves”应为“making lists”,此处“leaves”误用,应指“lists”(清单)。
× For example, due to different unexpected things happened, the least doesn't work on people cannot finish all.
✓ For example, due to different unexpected things happening, the list doesn't work and people cannot finish all.
“things happened”应改为现在分词“things happening”以符合句意;“least”应为“list”;句子结构需调整使其通顺。
× I usually make a list on a paper when I am at home, while I will use my phone to plan if I am outdoors since is more convenient for me to type and.
✓ I usually make a list on paper when I am at home, while I will use my phone to plan if I am outdoors since it is more convenient for me to type.
“on a paper”应为“on paper”,因为“paper”在此为不可数名词;句末“and”后缺少内容,应删除;“since is”缺少主语,应为“since it is”。