List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I make a list when I want to shop because it makes it easier for me to buy only the things I really need. Also, I don't spend money on unnecessary items." This will make your answer more natural and clear.

Example: Yes, I make a list when I want to shop because it helps me buy only the things I really need. Also, I avoid spending money on unnecessary items, which saves me time and money.

Suggestion: Focus on using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. For example, say "Yes, I make a list of tasks I want to do, and it helps me follow my plan. Since I have a busy schedule and need to prepare for exams, planning works well for me." This will improve clarity and coherence.

Example: Yes, I make a list of tasks I want to do, and it helps me follow my plan. Since I have a busy schedule and need to prepare for exams, planning works well for me.

Suggestion: Avoid confusing phrases and improve sentence clarity. For example, say "I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a plan." This makes your answer more natural and easier to understand.

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a plan.

Suggestion: Use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, say "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier. My phone is always with me, so I can write lists anytime. Typing is quick and convenient, and I always have my lists with me."

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier. My phone is always with me, so I can write lists anytime. Typing is quick and convenient, and I always have my lists with me.

× Yes, I make a list when I wanted to shop something because it makes easier for me to shop the things that I really needed.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I want to shop for something because it makes it easier for me to shop for the things that I really need.

The sentence mixes past tense 'wanted' and 'needed' with present tense 'make' and 'makes'. Since the question is about a habitual action, present tense should be used consistently. Also, 'makes easier' is missing 'it' to be grammatically correct, and 'shop something' should be 'shop for something'. Use present tense for habitual actions to maintain consistency.

× Also, I don't pay for extra things that I don't need it and uh, it's uh, useless for me.

✓ Also, I don't pay for extra things that I don't need, and uh, it's uh, useless for me.

The pronoun 'it' is redundant after 'things that I don't need'. The relative clause already refers to 'things', so adding 'it' is incorrect. Removing 'it' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I make a list for my things that I wanted to do and it's helped me to go by plan and because I have a busy schedule right now and I needed to take a exam, I also exam so I need the plans and it's work all the time.

✓ Yes, I make a list of the things that I want to do and it helps me to follow the plan because I have a busy schedule right now and I need to take an exam. I also have exams, so I need the plans and it works all the time.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense verbs 'wanted', 'helped', 'needed' when present tense is appropriate to describe current habits and situations. Also, 'a exam' should be 'an exam' due to vowel sound. 'It's work' should be 'it works' for subject-verb agreement. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I don't know why some people don't like to make English, but I think they didn't like to write something and go by plan and they wanted to do to do as it's came to their mind or came to their life, so it's easier for them to don't go by plan.

✓ I don't know why some people don't like to make lists, but I think they don't like to write things down and follow a plan. They want to do things as they come to their mind or life, so it's easier for them not to follow a plan.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and incorrect verb forms. 'Make English' is incorrect; likely meant 'make lists'. 'Didn't like' should be present tense 'don't like' to match context. 'Do to do' is redundant. 'It's came' should be 'they come'. 'Don't go by plan' should be 'not to follow a plan'. These corrections clarify meaning and fix pronoun and tense errors.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error found.

× Everything I want on my phone we just type and it did.

✓ Whenever I want to add something on my phone, I just type it and it is done.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Everything I want on my phone we just type and it did' is confusing. Rewriting to 'Whenever I want to add something on my phone, I just type it and it is done' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× It didn't raise easily so I have it all the time.

✓ It doesn't erase easily, so I have it all the time.

'Didn’t raise' is incorrect; likely meant 'didn't erase'. Also, tense should be present 'doesn't erase' to match context. Correcting the verb and tense improves clarity and grammatical correctness.