List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, focus on the question about shopping lists specifically. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by directly addressing the question and adding more specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Example: I don't have a job yet because I'm a student, but I believe making a list at work is helpful because it organizes tasks and ensures nothing is forgotten.

Suggestion: Your answer is too brief and vague. Try to provide more specific reasons and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to explain your points clearly.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming, especially when they have a heavy workload at the office.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to make your answer flow better.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check what to buy and complete my shopping efficiently.

× Yes, I always make list to work, to plan a schedule for my whole day and sometime I make a list of grocery grocery to remember while I visit to the market.

✓ Yes, I always make lists to work, to plan a schedule for my whole day and sometimes I make a list of groceries to remember while I visit the market.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the speaker refers to making multiple lists for different purposes. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Grocery grocery' is a repetition error; it should be 'groceries' in plural form to refer to multiple items. Also, 'visit to the market' should be 'visit the market' without 'to'.

× I should, I must remember and buy them all.

✓ I should, I must remember to buy them all.

The verb 'remember' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to buy' to indicate the action that needs to be remembered. Omitting 'to' is incorrect here.

× Actually I don't work, I'm still a student, but I think it is beneficial to make a list at work.

✓ Actually, I don't work; I'm still a student, but I think it is beneficial to make a list for work.

Adding a comma after 'Actually' improves clarity. Using a semicolon or period separates two independent clauses properly. 'At work' is better expressed as 'for work' to indicate the purpose of making a list.

× Some people don't like to make a list because it's kinda boring and uh, maybe their workload at the office and that's it.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it's kind of boring and, maybe, their workload at the office is heavy, and that's it.

After 'don't like', the gerund form 'making' is preferred over the infinitive 'to make'. 'Kinda' should be 'kind of' for formal correctness. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'is heavy' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on phone because I always bring my phone to the market and many places, so it will be easy for me to look and check what should I buy or what should I should not buy and I will complete my task easily at any time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone to the market and many places, so it is easy for me to look and check what I should buy or what I should not buy, and I can complete my tasks easily at any time.

'On phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'What should I buy' should be 'what I should buy' for correct word order in indirect questions. 'Should I should not buy' has a repeated 'should'; it should be corrected. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple items to buy.